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Title: Chapter 16: The Last Place He Wanted to Be 29 Mar 2008 5:33 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I was really surprised when Wormtail showed up. Maybe they can try going back to Godrics Hollow with someone else there to back them up if Death Eaters show up. Great chapter and I am very curious to see what will happen next! :)

    Author's Response:

    I was trying to keep with the books in terms of the enemy...right now only Wormtail is working with Voldemort, so he turned out to be the villain of the piece. 

    Thank you for posting!

Title: Chapter 16: The Last Place He Wanted to Be 29 Mar 2008 5:28 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job! I loved the patronus part and also the way Severus started to see Lily in Harry and care for him. The healing after the battle was wonderful also. So was the battle with Pettigrew, the slimeball.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I enjoyed writing about the Patronus.  And I figured there were subtle features of Harry's that were passed down from Lily--he can't just be James with green eyes.  I think the healing was important because in the past, Snape was solely concerned with keeping Harry's body intact.  Now he's thinking about what an injury would mean for the person inside that body. 

     


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