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Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 21 Jan 2013 3:28 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That's so sweet. He obviously will let go but I bet he'll react badly to having the known world Harry back again. It's strange how both Snapes want the other Harry.
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 07 Feb 2011 10:21 pm
Reviewer: PersianPianist (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think it's fair how you've managed to show that everyone likes the parallel Harry and no one really could like the original one in comparison. He had good points too, and you have diminished that to a heart-breaking point. I only hope the original Snape and Harry could develop that same relationships as with the parallel one. like both of them learnt their lesson.

    Author's Response: Another reader wrote that the canon Harry & Snape connected on their own, darker level.  I thought that was a good way to sum it up.
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 19 Mar 2009 10:57 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn it all, just when things get good, you pull this? This is so sad! The only hope I have left is that when the other Harry comes back, maybe he'll want a relationship with Severus too. I can only hope.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I know—it's like the story is based on conflict or something!  ;)  Cross your fingers and wish the characters good luck.  :)
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 19 Mar 2009 9:05 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for updating this story! It would be a tragedy if this was abandoned because it is one of the very best Severus mentoring Harry stories out there.

    I loved your ending line to this chapter. I can feel Severus' pain.

    Author's Response:

    No, I certainly don't want to abandon it!  I felt guilty about the long delay, but ultimately I'm responsible for the quality of my story.  It doesn't matter how much pressure I might feel to post something for the sake of posting. 

    Thank you for the review!

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 19 Mar 2009 6:57 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. Very well done! Marvelous!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Jan.  :)
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 24 Feb 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Seekino (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Is fic abandon? No update more than six month?

    Author's Response:

    No, the story's not abandoned--just suffering from an overworked author.  Chapter 21 still needs a smidge more editing, but it's close to meeting my insanely perfectionistic standards.  :) 

    Thank you for being so nice about asking! 

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 07 Jan 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: Aaisha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello, How are you doing? NO update :( You know I really liked this deleted scene idea. I too will love to read both the before and after versions! I will be marvelous. Do consider it. Takecare.

    Author's Response:

    All right, Miss Pushy Pants!  I will try to post this Monday. 

    And you have way too much faith in those deleted scenes.  Ever watch the deleted scenes on a DVD and think, "Yeah, there was a reason those scenes were deleted."  That's how I feel about mine.  I could maybe include them in a blog post about writing, and why they don't work.   

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 07 Jan 2009 5:35 pm
Reviewer: Lola (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey Malora surely rewritten chapters are not in too bad a shape. Can't you post them just as they are?...yeh I'm desperate now. Anyway good luck for your original character/story.

    Author's Response:

    The next chapter is looking pretty good now.  It's just...I can make it a bit better.  I know--I'm incredibly annoying.  ;)  Thanks for the luck sent my way!  :)

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 18 Dec 2008 12:23 am
Reviewer: Oberoten (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A glorious look at the path not taken...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad to know you've enjoyed it.  :)
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 17 Dec 2008 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No worries:) Your story is gem, and I really would enjoy reading both versions.

    Author's Response:

    Hmm, sort of an alternate universe for the alternate universe?  That could be interesting...and confusing.  :) 

    I'm happy to hear that you're still interested in the story, though.  I'll have to think about this whole "deleted scenes" idea.  


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