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Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 16 Dec 2008 3:58 am
Reviewer: firefly124 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. This is absolutely great! I've devoured it in a day and I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I've gotten a bit behind in my updates, but I'm still working on the next chapter.  I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 15 Dec 2008 4:58 am
Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Since updating this story has apparently become a problem, you might consider posting the remaining chapters as you wrote them originally and then revise them as you get the chance.

    Author's Response: I have been considering that, but I changed a major plot point in an earlier chapter.  It's one of the reasons editing has been taking longer, since it's essentially become re-writing to fit the new plot direction.  And after re-writing comes more editing...really, the main problem is that I'm a perfectionist.  

    However, these little nudges in the reviews have reviewed my motivation, and I've made more progress in the past few days than I have in a while.  

    Thanks for the gentle approach, by the way.  When I saw the e-mail notification, I was worried someone popped in to throw things in my general direction.  
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 08 Dec 2008 6:41 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Well now, m'dear, where's the rest? You can send me the chapter and I'll beta again, if you like. :)

    -K

    Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the offer.  Yes, I've been a naughty fanfic author.  I'm definitely getting coal in my stocking if I don't update soon.  

    I think I've finally (finally!) figured out what was bothering me about this next chapter.  I spent quite a bit of time staring at it in consternation.  Then I read a new writing book and had a light bulb moment.

    I'm honestly not sure whether I should be with or without a beta at this point.  I think most betas would want to strangle me for my productivity issues.  What I really need is someone to chain me to the chair and then stand behind me with a whip.  

    Got any ideas on how to owl Argus Filch?
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 14 Oct 2008 11:06 pm
Reviewer: aloveablegimp (Signed) [Report This]
    Nor should he let go! He needs Harry forever and ever. :) At least that's how it works in my world. Please update soon and let us catch up on everyone! I love this story very much and I just hope it ends happily!

    Love and a Peace,
    Kates

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!  Sorry for the late reply; I'm catching up on my reviews...and updates.  I hope you're still interested in the next chapter when I post it.  :)
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 14 Oct 2008 7:36 am
Reviewer: Jaime (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aspen recommended this fic, and she was absolutely correct, it's wonderful. I read all of the posted chapters today, and am eagerly awaiting the rest of the story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm sorry I've been so behind on my updates, but I'm getting back on track.  Hopefully you'll pick up the rest of the story.  :)
     
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 13 Oct 2008 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Enid (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Inspired work; just finished it, in one sitting of course, as I just couldn't stay away. I love how you gave a new twist on the old Snape-is-Harry's-father plot, and how the details were written in, complementing the "main" story - I still remember having smiled at Dumbledore's "ground" pun, even though I can still feel the aftershock from those last two sentences. I'm so glad I saw the recc for this fic.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 13 Oct 2008 11:01 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! This is riveting. (At 3 AM, on a work night, I think I can safely say that.)

    The characters are so lovely, in character, and changing due to events in the story.

    I love monkey Harry. So that is what Harry would be like with a dad, a Slytherin dad, who loved him.

    Oh, Well done! (Putting on my best Oliver Twist voice: Please, can I have some more?)

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) It's wonderful when people get pulled into my story so deeply.

    I think the differences between the two Harrys, and the evolution of the canon characters, are saying something about the effect of love.

    How can I deny an Oliver Twist voice? :) I'm working on more right now.

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 12 Oct 2008 9:21 pm
Reviewer: Lola (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please please please update. Its been forever since you did the last time. Wasn't the story complete, just needed editing? I am willing to read the unedited version even now. Good story, very unique and exciting writing style. *thumps up* :D

    Author's Response:

    I know; I'm sorry.  It was never my intention for the updates to be this far apart.  I originally saw my completed original draft as nearly perfect as-is, and thought I could post each chapter with a minimum of fuss.  But the process of editing, reading books on writing, and thinking about reader comments have helped me to become a better writer.  Now I can see that the next few chapters require complete re-writes so that the story can be at its best.  I'm working on the editing of the next chapter now, and I will squeeze every bit of free time I can into getting it posted ASAP.

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 26 Sep 2008 9:40 am
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story! keep up the good work. cont updating. :")

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Next update is coming soon.  :)
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 06 Sep 2008 2:52 pm
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    IK!
    So good.
    Poor Snape.:/
    You're such a talented writer!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the compliment and the review!  :)


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