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Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 01 Sep 2008 8:31 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad Other Harry (as I’ve dubbed him ;p) could persuade Snape to let them go to the World Cup, that meant a lot to him. They had fun for a little while, but then the stink'n Death Eaters showed up and made a mess of things. As always, you did an amazing job describing both the scenes and characters feelings.

    This new turn of events is really interesting. I'm curious about how much longer the Harrys will be able to stay in the other universes. On one hand; it's good that they get back to their own universe and families, but on the other I feel bad for Harry and Sev because Harry will miss Lily and Sev seems to have gotten attached to Other Harry. Conflicting emotions!

    Please post again when you can! Can’t wait to read more :)

    Author's Response: I know, those stink'n Death Eaters ruin everything!  ;)  Thank you for the review--I do like to explore conflicting emotions.  Glad you enjoyed it.  :D
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 17 Aug 2008 11:05 pm
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww Severus! This is going to be hard! There's something so adorable about the way that Harry is a little climber! Great update!

    Author's Response:  

    I enjoy that about Harry, too.  I can't remember how I came up with that, now.  But it suits him.  :) 

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 17 Aug 2008 12:41 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    omg, i just dont know. I mean I understand that Harry and Snape will grow from the experience but its still so painful, I mean Harry's going to loose Lily again, and a father figure, I mean he might even be a bit jelous of the parallel world harry! I don't blame him, and Snape likes the other world harry but in that too..our Harry is NOTHING like that, The P.World Harry is fun, happy almost carefree and smart, ...ugghh i guess i'm just going to have to wait till you update again hun?
    ....
    well...what r u waiting for??? UPDATE alreadyyy!!!!!

    10/10

    Author's Response:  

    I can't comment on spoilers, I'm afraid...so yeah, you'll have to wait for the update.  Sorry!  But I'm sure reading the story is a more satisfying experience than getting a summary of it, even if you got the summary earlier.

    I'm back to working 50 hours a week...but I'll update as soon as I can.  :)

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 15 Aug 2008 5:51 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Weep for Severus: "He couldn't let go. He didn't know how."

    What a wonderful writer you are. I'm so glad you updated this end of the story. Please hurry with more. You make us so hungry to read more!

    Author's Response:

    It's great to know that those last lines had such an effect on you.  :)   Thank you!

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 15 Aug 2008 3:19 am
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, oh, oh! Poor Snape! I just want to give him hugs! And what's happening with Harry in the other world?! Eeep! I can't wait till your next update.

    Author's Response:

    If you can find him, you can hug him.  :)  Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 15 Aug 2008 2:07 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my!!! Poor Severus.

    Author's Response: True.  :(
Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 14 Aug 2008 8:27 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus - maybe when the other Harry comes home, he and Sevuers can make a family.

    I never thought of Harry as loving to climb. That must have driven parrel world Severus crazy.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, the climbing was probably driving Snape to an early grave...or so I imagine him telling Harry.  ;)

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 14 Aug 2008 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! I want to cry. So beautiful, you are truly such a gifted writer! I am so glad that you have updated finally!!

    You have really set the foundation for when the Harry's are switched back to their respective worlds; that just MAYBE a new understanding will develop with the known world Harry and Snape too.

    I feel bad though because the other Harry will lose Lilly; but just maybe he will gain a father, or at the very least a mentor in Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm glad I finally updated, too.  ;)  

    I have been trying to create a character arc so that Harry and Snape aren't the same people they started out as...I love stories that have that kind of growth. 

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts.  :)

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 14 Aug 2008 9:25 am
Reviewer: Kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Shit, I've been waiting for you to update, shit shit shit, this is brilliant! omg you seriously have to update the next chapter i need to know what happens to our harry!

    Author's Response:

    I'm happy to hear you liked the chapter so much.  And that it makes you swear like a sailor.  ;)  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End 14 Aug 2008 7:10 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    "He couldn't let go. He didn't know how."

    Argh. Tear our hearts out, Malora. Of course, I guess we knew this was coming, right? Still, you really know how to write some truly beautiful depth in your angsty scenes.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed the last lines (is "enjoyed" the right word, considering your reaction?).  I like to explore both the lighter and darker moments.


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