| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 25 May 2010 12:45 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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Much improved! I was on the edge of my (literal) seat. :)
-K
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 24 May 2010 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: A Nonne. (Anonymous)
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Wow - this is terrific. Insects as a reified metaphor for the memory-gnawing curse - fantastic! And Harry-from-our-world is clearly doing his Saving People Thing again. I am desperate to know if Snape-from-our-world will be able to find his connection to our world's Harry when he returns. Maybe in helping our world's Harry with the curse?
But the very best point of the chapter imho was Snape's agonized admission to Harry - "I can't do this without you. Any of it." Other-world's Harry has changed over the course of this fic, but other-world's Snape has too.
Great stuff!!!!!
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 24 May 2010 8:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Lia (Signed)
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For a moment there, I thought that Snape was going to die. And then, as everything was falling apart - Snape dying, Lily forgetting once again, Harry yet not back in his body with the rock collapsing - literally and figuratively, Harry returned and saved the day.
And yet, everything is not all well and happy. Harry Potter ends up taking part of the curse with him and I want to hope that the curse does not survive inter-reality travel since it's only sould which can travel that way and the curse latched to mind and not soul, I do not dare to hope. Perhaps, the other Snape, our Snape, can find a cure nevertheless.
And hopefully, Lily is cured enough that the potions would help her get better.
And I loved the flashes of death of Snape's father ... the way u used it. The entire chapter is awesome. As usual. :)
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