Title: Chapter 19: The Promises of Slytherins
| 21 Jan 2013 3:12 am
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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It sucks that real Harry has to live up to other Harry's amazing skill at everything. Thanks you for a great chapter and for making it an action chapter. Wouldn't it have been easier if Harry swallowed the salvus, because he wouldn't have his portkey on him anymore?
This is super exciting and depressing at the same time, I love it. It's fantastic that known world Snape likes other Harry and is so protective and accepting of him but it would be awful to be ripped from your real father. It reminds me of one of the plots from greengecko's resonance series where Severus forgets the last few years and Harry has to try to start over. Thank you for another chapter, I can't wait to see what happens when they switch back.
Title: Chapter 17: The Other Side of Morning
| 21 Jan 2013 2:40 am
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Awww. Snape's 'little one.' I have to say I didn't see that coming. It's great that they're getting along better now and that Snape was so great after Harry ruined the dragonwort.
Title: Chapter 16: The Last Place He Wanted to Be
| 21 Jan 2013 2:31 am
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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I love that Snape has begun to care for other Harry but I feel like no one wants the real Harry and both universes want other Harry which is just so sad. Thank you for another amazing chapter.
Title: Chapter 15: Outside Looking In
| 20 Jan 2013 9:55 pm
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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I'm glad that they're finally almost bonding but wasn't the other Harry ever curious about James?
Ha, that was a great ending. And Harry is such a slytherin! I love it.
Title: Chapter 13: The Other Side of Night
| 20 Jan 2013 9:54 am
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Wow. I am surprised by Lily's reaction to the broom and how does she always know that Harry is not her son and how could Harry have screwed everything up so quickly?! This chapter was great because it really made me go through a lot of emotions although by the time you're done with me I'll probably be an emotional wreck.
How do the blood wards work on this Harry.?First, he doesn't think of Privet Drive as his home and Lily didn't really die for him so I don't think it would apply.
I love that Harry and other Snape are starting to find their way even as they deny each others existence. And it's great how this Harry is doing so well with Lily.
Harry is so conniving in this world, I love it. I also love how great this Snape is with other Harry and your portrayals are so realistic (in my opinion) although I wish everyone would just get along already.
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