Title: Chapter 9: A Place of Strangers
| 20 Jan 2013 9:14 am
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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I love Dumbledore but sometimes he should just tell Harry what is going on.
It's amazing how much this Harry seems to look up to Snape and expect so much out of him. I wish 'other' Snape would just do that with 'real' Harry too.
Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall
| 20 Jan 2013 8:57 am
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Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Wait I just realized something. If Voldemort attacked the Potters then why wasn't Harry attacked? And if he was, then why is Severus not considered a traitor for adopting Harry. And if he is, then why would Harry be spending playdates with death eater-Lusius' son, Draco? Awww, Snape was super sweet at the end of this chapter.
This Snape is not exactly nice, but I think it's amazing how much he puts up with from this Harry. Thanks again for writing this, it sounds extraordinarily difficult so I really appreciate it.
Wow. I never expected such a different scenario but still the same you know. I am still angry at Snape but I'm surprised athow he's not even trying to understand this Harry.
I like that this Snape is at least somewhat accepting of the change but that'sjust because he didn't have a real connection with the 'real'Harry.
Oh Merlin that was awful. I mean the writing was great but it was such a heartbreaking chapter. I really think this Harry has it a lot worse. I can't believe that you just told this Harry that he wasn't good enough for his mum. And Snape wants to get rid of him . . . I guess my desire to scream at Snape right now is just proof that you are just an amazing writer.
Arrrrgh! I feel so bad for everybody! My heart and tear ducts are just going to explode!
Otherwise, great chapter and I just really hope that people start connecting soon or I'm just going to go mental with emotions.
This is killing me here. I love that Snape is so amazing with the 'other' Harry but I can't help but think he's being too harsh on the 'known world' Harry. I love the one version but I hate him with the 'known world' Harry because that was just cruel. I hope that makes sense.
Title: Chapter 24: Unspoken Words
| 04 Jan 2013 1:33 am
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Reviewer: moni (Anonymous)
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I laughed, I cried and I loved along with the fic. I totally enjoyed this. it was wonderfully done.
this is the most touchy fic I have ever read in all the sites.
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