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Reviews For Never Say Remember
Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 02 Jan 2008 7:15 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm very ashamed that I haven't read or reviewed your story before. It's fantastic! You've nailed Harry's character perfectly! You caught my interest from the first paragraph and by the middle of the story, I was hooked. My heart about skipped a beat when Harry saw his mother sitting on the bed. I definitely wasn't expecting that!

    You've also written Snape very well. It's actually very similar to how I'd expect him to act as Harry's guardian.

    But the greatest thing about this chapter is the dialogue. It's realistic and flows smoothly, and overall, this is just a very well-written fic! I love it!

    Author's Response:

    Don't feel ashamed!  Too many stories, not enough time.  And I'm making "write more reviews" one of my New Year's resolutions, because there's just so many I want to review and haven't yet!

    I’m so glad that you're enjoying the twists and turns!  It's always a delicate balance with the summary and story warnings…I want to let people know what the story is about without ruining the surprises. 

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 8:18 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 6:28 pm
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Wooo, wonderful chapter! Please update soon. I'm finding your story more and more delightful each time.

    Author's Response:

    I appreciate the kind words!  Definitely more soon.

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 6:19 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow. That will probably feel like Lily rejected him. I feel so sorry for all of them. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he probably had a very idealized version of what seeing his mum would be like, and it doesn't seem to be working out that way.    Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 5:48 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! Your reasons for picking this age make perfect sense. This is a really good story and I am looking forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response:

    The awkward age just became even more awkward.  :)  Thanks for the feedback!

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 10:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic story. I believe that it is fast becoming one of my favorites. The only thing I don't like, is that there isn't more to read. :P Thanks for sharing this with us. :)

    Author's Response:

    Well, that's the best criticism I could get.  ;)   There will be more to read soon! 

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 28 Dec 2007 4:55 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response:

    I'm pleased you enjoyed it.  More soon!

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 28 Dec 2007 4:50 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, totally different from what I've read, very good start.

    Author's Response:

    First chapters can be a bit tricky.  Glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 21 Dec 2007 10:51 pm
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have read quite a few Snape adopts Harry fics and I am glad that your story is different from the majority that I read. Well written, and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thanx for the story.

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome!  Thank you for your feedback!

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 21 Dec 2007 10:41 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Harry. Poor kid. and Snape- what a shock for him to learn of a different reality! Fantastic start to the story, Yes, this chapter was short, but since I got to read two at the same time,I can hardly complain. :) I hope that you are able to update soon! Marvelous idea! Thanks for posting it!

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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