| Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel
| 13 Apr 2011 9:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Sarah Benburg (Anonymous)
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I read your full story. Thank you for writing such a great story and giving us the privileged to read. All the best
from Sarah Benburg
London,England
Consolida Sugar Corporation
http://www.icumsa-sugar-sellers.com
| Title: Chapter 24: Unspoken Words
| 01 Mar 2011 6:29 am
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| Reviewer: anonymous reader (Anonymous)
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I reviewed your previous chapter, begging for you to write the finale to this amazing fanfiction. I was so glad when I checked back and there it was.
The ending is wonderful (and so are the beginning and the middle). I would love to see more of both worlds, but you picked a good place to end at.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
Author's Response: Thank you, anonymous reader! :) I'm glad I was able to finish it in a good place, as well.
Well. I cried. Good job with this. Keep up the good work.
| Title: Chapter 24: Unspoken Words
| 25 Feb 2011 9:45 pm
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| Reviewer: lisa_tid (Anonymous)
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I just finished the whole story in one go. I hung onto every word. Amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you--glad you enjoyed it so much.
Fab story, well written with excellent character development
You managed to draw tears out of my eyes. beautiful ending!
I don't think it's fair how you've managed to show that everyone likes the parallel Harry and no one really could like the original one in comparison. He had good points too, and you have diminished that to a heart-breaking point. I only hope the original Snape and Harry could develop that same relationships as with the parallel one. like both of them learnt their lesson.
Author's Response: Another reader wrote that the canon Harry & Snape connected on their own, darker level. I thought that was a good way to sum it up.
| Title: Chapter 24: Unspoken Words
| 07 Feb 2011 12:38 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful wonderful story thank you so much for completing your fantastic story and with such a great ending thank you
| Title: Chapter 24: Unspoken Words
| 05 Feb 2011 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: nicky (Anonymous)
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This was an awesome story. Had me in tears for the last few chapters though. Good job!
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