| Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced
| 03 Jul 2010 4:57 am
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| Reviewer: Taryn (Signed)
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So. Awesome. That is all I have to say.
For now.
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 07 Jun 2010 12:00 pm
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| Reviewer: anonymous reader (Anonymous)
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I don't often read incomplete fanfictions, but this one sounded so unique that I had to read it. Now that I've read this much, I remember why I usually stick to finished fics. I have to know what happens next. Please, oh, please, oh, please update! Please? You're a wonderful writer!
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 26 May 2010 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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Ohhh... you write so beautifully!!! A phrase here, a look there, the stage is set so simply and beautifully... and this time I had my box of Kleenex at the ready!!
I am thrilled that Harry arrived in time. He made a hard choice in who to save. I will wait (patiently!) to see if our Harry was with him the whole time, and helped him decide who to save first. It is certainly HIS pattern to want to save everyone (just reread GOF, and the challenge at the lake!) and it was a wonderful moment when Snape realized it was our Harry who was going to make what could be the ultimate sacrifice for his dear Mum.
This is of course, your playground of a story, and I have never been disappointed in ANY of the moments you have given us. I hope you will forgive me if I express a small hope (!!) that our Harry will not truly pay the ultimate price for his generosity. Perhaps OUR Snape is just smart enough that he will be able to develop a countercurse.
Be that as it may, thank you for a wonderful chapter!!!
Once again, you've brought tears to my eyes. It will be interesting to see what Harry Potter remembers, once he gets back to his own world. Will he truly have absorbed the curse from this world? Will known Severus have ANY other response to him? Excellent, most excellent story. Thank you for all your work. (Fingers crossed, that we may get another chapter within another month?...I can hope and dream, can't I?)
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 25 May 2010 12:07 pm
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed)
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Oh Wow No! I want more please update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pLEASE
| Title: Chapter 9: A Place of Strangers
| 25 May 2010 5:41 am
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| Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 25 May 2010 12:46 am
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| Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous)
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Great story, great chapter! Loved it, do update soon!! I deperately want to know what happens to Harry Potter!
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 25 May 2010 12:45 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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Much improved! I was on the edge of my (literal) seat. :)
-K
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 24 May 2010 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: A Nonne. (Anonymous)
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Wow - this is terrific. Insects as a reified metaphor for the memory-gnawing curse - fantastic! And Harry-from-our-world is clearly doing his Saving People Thing again. I am desperate to know if Snape-from-our-world will be able to find his connection to our world's Harry when he returns. Maybe in helping our world's Harry with the curse?
But the very best point of the chapter imho was Snape's agonized admission to Harry - "I can't do this without you. Any of it." Other-world's Harry has changed over the course of this fic, but other-world's Snape has too.
Great stuff!!!!!
| Title: Chapter 23: A Certain Slant of Light
| 24 May 2010 8:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Lia (Signed)
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For a moment there, I thought that Snape was going to die. And then, as everything was falling apart - Snape dying, Lily forgetting once again, Harry yet not back in his body with the rock collapsing - literally and figuratively, Harry returned and saved the day.
And yet, everything is not all well and happy. Harry Potter ends up taking part of the curse with him and I want to hope that the curse does not survive inter-reality travel since it's only sould which can travel that way and the curse latched to mind and not soul, I do not dare to hope. Perhaps, the other Snape, our Snape, can find a cure nevertheless.
And hopefully, Lily is cured enough that the potions would help her get better.
And I loved the flashes of death of Snape's father ... the way u used it. The entire chapter is awesome. As usual. :)
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