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Reviews For Harry and the Mystery of Age
I like the points system of discipline that Severus worked out with Harry...I think it will be very useful in teaching Harry self-control, which is the real point of discipline after all. Harry is so powerful with his magic, but you also do a great job showing that he is still a vulnerable child, too. I feel sorry for Lily, though I know she is really fortunate to have another chance at life and to be with her family...but to miss so many years of her youth would have to be very hard, both physically and emotionally. And I can't wait to see where Harry has ended up!
Author's Response: Fawkes is a really enjoyable character here - and a good friend to Harry :-) Thanks for beta-ing!!
Author's Response: LOL That we have to find out I'm afraid *still laughing*... - sorry, but I won't let you wait too long :-)
Poor Harry has a problem with low self image. I am glad that Tom and Min are helping him. Author's Response: I don't know if he's really in trouble - maybe he found something interesting? Poor Harry, yes - it's probably still the influence of the Dursleys as he has all his memories of his first childhood with them... Thanks for reading and reviewing :-) |
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