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Title: I MAKE HIM ILL 02 Mar 2008 7:39 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no! When will all this trouble end for poor Harry. And not Lily too! *snifs*

    I do have to say, I really like that O'Brien healer guy. Do you I see a spark of romance between he and Poppy? Hmmm.

    I love these mobile phones too. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, Dumbledore still has lots of ideas. I'm currently writing chapter 35 and he's still around ;-)

    Poppy and O'Brien? Maybe - Poppy's reaction was obvious to Harry too (or was that in the next chapter? *Hmmm*) :-)

Title: I MAKE HIM ILL 01 Mar 2008 11:15 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I know you needed it for the plot, but I'm really sorry that the hospital had to "forget" that Dumbledore was an animagus. I don't know whether to believe it was a typical hospital mistake, or they were incredibly stupid. I wish it could have been that as Albus was 'getting better' as evidenced by the increasing attacks on Harry, that he was able to overcome the restrictions. Or even better, as Harry was getting older Albus was able to 'steal' more of Harry's magic to do so. I guess I just wish human error could be less of a factor over-all. I finally got to catch up with your story and it's very good by the way! I reread your response to my last review and you questioned me about the joke shop. If this happened after the tri-wizard event, then Harry had given his winnings to the twins and was a partner in the shop with all the rights, etc. But maybe in your 'verse that never happened. I don't mean to complain since your story is about Harry and his immediate family, but was anything done to Persey for his treachery? Sorry to bring up ancient history, but from important canon characters to never mentioned is tough. How come Luna and Hermoine became professors yet Neville is still studying for his mastery? Are they masters too and Neville is just slower? I kinda wish Lilly hadn't had to have her body age on her. Yes, it explained why Harry couldn't form a better relationship with his mother since she had to 'recover' from the sudden aging, but it seems that Lilly and Severus can no longer expand their family so Harry remains an only child. Finally, why haven't you had Dumbledore kissed? Just what he did with Tom and the deaths he caused should have done it, but now it appears even more needful. Imagine what the wizarding world will loose if such talent as Harry is killed by that madman? Ah, the needs of plot. If you have to have a villian, then you did pick a good one...just too good in my opinion! I agree that you have an excellent beta: the quality of the editing is outstanding!

    Author's Response: Not everyone in the world knows that Dumbledore is an Animagus. The Aurors knew because they were told... So it's not the mistake of the hospital but of the Ministry. Of course the joke shop happened many years ago in Harry's first childhood. Percy? For this story he's not important at all; therefore he won't be mentioned. Luna and Hermione are not masters. They just started to teach more or less immediately after finishing school. Why does Harry have to remain an only child? This is the magical world! The members of my newsgroup have already voted for a name for his sister ;-). When should Dumbledore have been kissed? He has never been in Azkaban so far. I'm sorry for the wizarding world if they loose such a talent because of a madman - in HP7 many talents were lost because of a madman too ;-). Last question: How do you know about the quality of editing? At the moment, I don't have betas who edit my stories. They correct my mistakes as I'm not a native speaker of English ;-).
Title: I MAKE HIM ILL 01 Mar 2008 5:34 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no! Poor Harry and Lily! I really was afraid of Dumbledore being able to be adequately contained. He is such an extremely powerful wizard. I think Harry may be the only one who is his equal, and Harry is still a child and doesn't have all the years of experience that Dumbledore does, even if he has the natural talent.

    That virus sounds horrible! If only Dobby had discovered it sooner and could have warned them in time not to drink it.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Kristeh, it is horrible, and I'm afraid the next chapter will be a bit sad...

    Dumbledore - yes, he is powerful... but he's also very clever :-(

    Thanks for reading and reviewing - and have a great weekend :-)



    Author's Response:

    Yes, Kristeh, it is horrible, and I'm afraid the next chapter will be a bit sad...

    Dumbledore - yes, he is powerful... but he's also very clever :-(

    Thanks for reading and reviewing - and have a great weekend :-)

Title: I MAKE HIM ILL 01 Mar 2008 7:21 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    It's so cool that you update so frequently. This new news is quite horrible! And if it's contagious poor Sevy might get it! NOooooo! Approximaly how many more chapters are they're left to go?

    Author's Response:

    LOL .... Maybe there will be the 'Next great adventure' ...?! The story won't be finished soon. I'm currently writing chapter 33, and I guess it will be between 40 and 50 chapters. I hope you'll still enjoy!

    Warning: The next chapter is a bid sad! Sevvie will be fine though.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing :-)


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