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Title: BECAUSE I AM EVIL 21 Oct 2018 9:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: BECAUSE I AM EVIL 22 Mar 2008 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a terrible, terrible illness! I do hope Harry will recover! And I hope that Lily's unborn baby will be all right, too.

    Grr, evil Dumbledore! You know, canon Dumbledore certainly had faults, and I can never agree with his treatment of Harry (letting him stay with the Dursleys), but it is a very fortunate thing that he was on the side of the light. He'd have been more terrible than Voldemort even, I've always thought, if he'd wanted to be.
Title: BECAUSE I AM EVIL 05 Mar 2008 12:33 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This is horrible, poor Harry is getting worse. At least no one else will get the illness so that's good. Hope Harry gets better soon! I'm still upset with your whole Ron is bad idea though, since I like the character. However, I'm happy Lily is going to have a baby! I wonder if Harry will get a sister?

    Author's Response:

    Ah, if you hadn't reminded me of Ron, I wouldn't have missed him ;-). Sorry, but I really don't like him. Hmmm. Maybe I'll make him a good guy in my new story (Harry and the stubborn headmaster)... I'll think about it *promise*

    Hopefully the baby will be all right, and Harry will have a cute, little sister :-)

    Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Title: BECAUSE I AM EVIL 04 Mar 2008 1:56 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello again! A beta works with you on creating your story and matching it to you vision of how it should go. Yes, they help you fix mistakes. And editor is another word for doing that, but they also go for the grammar, punctuation and fluency mistakes that interfere with the readers ability to understand your intended meaning. Your story has no outstanding errors. Unusual for American writers nevermind when American English is a second language. Did anyone think that charming 20 then 50 magical cell phones-when the charm needed the magical energy of someone who is extremely strong-might just be a bad idea for someone about to face a major illness? As far as Harry starting to die, that just makes sense. The reason the sick, old and you often succomb to illnesses so quickly is that they have less physical resources for the fight. But you won't let Harry die! Why hasn't fawkes done anything? What about having Harry transform into a phoenix himself? Why didn't Harry's previous brush with basilisk venom give him some immunity? It's kind of like the joke shop; yes, it happened in his past, but in terms of real time, it was only a few years. As for his body, it was de-aged--but it had to work with all the same body that he had when he was older. It was just shrunk down, not re-created at a younger age. Or maybe I'm being too picky. You do have a fine sense of drama to keep coming up with all these cliffie's!
Title: BECAUSE I AM EVIL 04 Mar 2008 1:24 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no! Harry, poor Harry and poor Lily and poor everybody. Great chapter though. That last part gave me the chills.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, poor everybody LOL

    Yes, the last part was a bit sad, and several people have already told me that the chapter title fits....those, who thought that 'I' would be me and not Dumbledore ;-)

Title: BECAUSE I AM EVIL 03 Mar 2008 11:47 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry and Lily to be so sick. Enjoy the chapter especially the confrontation between Lily and Petunia.

    Author's Response: Yes, it was really time for Lily to go to her sister and say 'Thank you' ;-)

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