Do you plan on ever finishing this story or putting it up for adoption?
| Title: THAT THEY CAN GET ME
| 11 Jul 2008 6:36 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Although exciting in the sense that there is a lot of action happening to Harry, it is almost too much. With every chapter something else horrible seems to happen to the poor lad where the whole idea of a new childhood was to be happy not tortured to death. As well the motive behind Dumbledore's plot is yet to be reviled even though he has been in the Ministry's hands several times and under vertiserum.. Harry also is acting too young crying at the drop of a hat and still calling his father daddy instead of dad--only girls calls there fathers daddy after a very young age, it's not considered very manly to do otherwise. After all he calls his mother mum, not mummy. I would say it is time to move the story along and stop torturing Harry unless the idea is to find all the ways possible to do so turning out not a pwp but torture just torture story as all the warmth this story started with has disappated.
I'm glad Harry is learning to fight back against DD, and that Severus is able to help him. Hopefully, it won't be long now before Harry is free from him!
Ah, those potions can be dangerous, too, can't they?
I'm looking forward to more!
| Title: THAT THEY CAN GET ME
| 08 Apr 2008 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Oh, poor Harry. Why is it always Harry? *sigh* I love that Harry is doing pranks with the ghosts. Hee hee. That just cracks me up! Hope Harry's all right.
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