Hi! New rules about reviews prompted me to finally register to the site as this story definitely deserves a review.
I made it into an audiobook and simply loved listening to Snape's inner voice. His insistance that he doesn't care about the brat-who-lived while behaving like a parent is hilarious. I also love the angst with Moody. I can't wait for an update.
| Title: I Wasn't Born
| 18 Feb 2014 6:02 pm
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| Reviewer: hp (Anonymous)
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Best fix ever! Plz post d next chap asap!!!
I LOVE THIS!!! Especially Severus' side comments, and the animosity between him and Alastor.
I have never read anything like this before, I honestly only started it the other day and I havent been able to put it down, can't wait for more! :D
lol, love that last part. Wow, didn't realize I never read this chapter. Shame on me. Been a year sense last update, hope this story isn't abandoned!
I enjoyed seeing Snape and Moody working as a team, although they certainly didn't fall out of character during their mutual endeavors! Their repartee is fantastic! Sharp sarcasm combined with biting wit-- you couldn't ask for more! I can honestly say that I've never seen another writer tackle their prickly relationship as wholeheartedly (and DELIGHTFULLY) as you have. Speaking of prickly: a hedgehog Patronus for Moody is priceless! Fits him to a T! Wonderfully done!
I was so glad to see this updated! I decided to reread the tale from the beginning and I'm so very glad I did. Thank you for a very enjoyable few days of reading!
I love the changes you've made to the events of HPoTP, and I am particularly enjoying the interaction between Severus and Alastor. Of course, the why that Severus' opinion of Harry has shifted over the chapters has been great too. And you've managed to do it without losing the snarky mental commentary and the biting invective that are Severus' trademarks.
I'm very much looking forward to the future chapters (and I dearly hope that the final outcome for Severus is not as terminal as that in canon!).
Well done!
| Title: I Wasn't Born
| 02 Nov 2011 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating! I love the thought of Moody and Severus locked in a room together great snark and thoughts of Severus!
Oh wow cant even remember the last time I read this lol I really like the story though so will continue reading and hopefully i'll be able to read it all through at the end :) love the interaction between Severus and Alastor :)
Yeah! I'm so happy that you have had a chance to update this. This has really cheered my day. Thanks!
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