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Reviews For River of Dreams
Title: To the River so Deep 19 Aug 2009 4:14 am
Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This continues to enthrall - thank you.
    BTW British people do not use the word 'gotten' so anytime a character uses it it screams that he is American and not British- and spoils the story a bit. OR has watched far too much American TV.LOL) Where Americans would say gotten
    Bbrits use got - and yes, although that would not be grammatical in American English it is correct in British English. Brits have not used 'gotten' for a few hundred years, it is now archaic in Britian.
    Also, the standard past tense of the verb to dive is 'dived' and not 'dove', and again, not likely to be used in Britain.
    There are several web sites that can be found if you google for them that explain these particular and other differences between British English and American English.
    The 'gotten' one is the most disconcerting difference that I've ever encountered though, it really sounds strange to British ears.
Title: To the River so Deep 29 Dec 2007 9:17 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a wonderful, totally different story. Hope to see more soon. I'm glad Harry isn't a total dunderhead and Snape self commentary is great.
Title: To the River so Deep 29 Dec 2007 6:16 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the little bits of humor you put in with the adventure and pathos. I can perfectly see Harry and Severus speaking when I'm reading.

    It's sad that Harry is so haunted by nightmares. It's sad for Severus, too, but Harry is just a kid, and totally innocent. I hope Severus can begin to see that most of Harry's 'adventures' were actually very traumatic, and forced upon him, not just fun escapades he dreamed up to relieve boredom.

    And I don't know about bathing in the Amazon River. I, too, have heard horror stories about piranhas, and I think I'd rather be dirty---and I'm almost obsessively clean!
Title: To the River so Deep 29 Dec 2007 4:56 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great beginning. Like Harry's involvement with the first graders and the developing interaction between Snape and Harry.

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