Oh, very nice. I liked the suspense of the not-Draco bit.
| Title: We All End in the Ocean
| 17 Apr 2009 5:30 pm
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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What a breathtaking chapter!!! You make the whole horrible session come vividly to life (erk.....). I like that a Hufflepuff - loyal to a fault - is the one who rescues Snape, at risk to her life. How true that you are not the sum of the house you are sorted into, but a combination of traits of all the houses!
Although not a cliffhanger, this is one chapter that I am glad I am rereading and I do not have to wait for the next chapter to see what happens next!
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