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Title: I Don't Know Why I Go Walking at Night 20 Jul 2009 9:30 am
Reviewer: Shannon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I knew I recognized that line! :-) I'm a huge fan of M*A*S*H too. I'm really enjoying your story!
Title: I Don't Know Why I Go Walking at Night 13 Apr 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, it was one of the better lines in MASH, and certainly appropos here.
Title: I Don't Know Why I Go Walking at Night 04 Jan 2008 2:02 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not done reading, so I'll be giving a nice long reveiw later, but I just HAD to say that that line “Well, you're not smart; you're dumb. Very dumb. But you've met your match in me.” was hilarious! Ah, glad you used it, though I myslef have never seen what it is from.
Title: I Don't Know Why I Go Walking at Night 03 Jan 2008 7:47 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry it's taken me twenty-three chapters to review, but I've been soo tied up in your chapters that I'd just click the 'next' button and keep reading! Your story really is great, and although I haven't looked at it on ff.net, you've probably had it up for awhile. Thus, my review has even less meaning, especially since it's finished. I'm really glad that my friend recomended I read this one, although I guess I'd have gotten around to it eventually. But, seeing as it IS finished, I can read it in between updates from other stories that arn't yet...although I might finish this one tomorrow the way I'm going.

    Ok, onto the real review stuff...

    I do love how you've managed to keep everyone in character throughout all that's happened so far. And thinking about what happened to Snape again...*heart breaks* I hope that the relationship that's been created between him and Harry continues to grow, it really does both of them good. My only other thought about Severus is that he dosen't seem sarcastic and just plain snarky enough to me, but in the circumstances, especially being the Amazon jungle, it makes sense to not be so horrible to everyone.

    I also love your Harry, he's great, especially in those first few chapters when he was helping Micah and his cousin Lily. It was so great to see him stick up for Micah when he was being bullied too, some days in J.K.'s story I could really see him doing that. And although I really love being in Severus' head, it would be interesting to get some of what Harry's thinking...possible sequel? Although that would make the story be extremely overdone, but I would read it!

    I also like your new spin on Occlumency. It's fun to see Severus react to 'being' Harry in his memories, and I hadn't imagined it that way, but it's certainly entertaining. I also like using a room or 'maze' type of configuration to sort of trap the looker. It does make sense that it would work better than a solid wall or similar structure.

    I also adore this chapter, for no apparent reason other than it's brilliant to see Snape and Dumbledore (Snape especially) yell at Fudge...and for Fudge to reply with that awesome line from MASH. My whole family watches MASH and we own all the DVDs, and I've seen 99.9% of the episodes, and yet I was still unable to make the connection...time for a MASH marathon! But I do love it when authors pull from other sources than just Harry Potter alone; something I hope to master.

    Well, I'll update some time soon, probably on the last chapter and maybe on ff.net. But, I just wanted to let you know that it was a good idea to post here too! Good luck with any other projects you've got going on.
Title: I Don't Know Why I Go Walking at Night 03 Jan 2008 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Geek6 (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been thoroughly enjoying this story..so much so that I've sat and read it straight through from chapter 1 to here.. but may I point out just one teeny weeny thing from this chapter?

    When Harry says Fudge is nutters.. it should be nuts.. nutters is plural.. as in 'the twins are a pair of nutters'..one person alone is nuts..

    sorry.. I know it seems picky.. it's a britpick thing I guess...lol

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