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Reviews For River of Dreams
Ok, onto the real review stuff... I do love how you've managed to keep everyone in character throughout all that's happened so far. And thinking about what happened to Snape again...*heart breaks* I hope that the relationship that's been created between him and Harry continues to grow, it really does both of them good. My only other thought about Severus is that he dosen't seem sarcastic and just plain snarky enough to me, but in the circumstances, especially being the Amazon jungle, it makes sense to not be so horrible to everyone. I also love your Harry, he's great, especially in those first few chapters when he was helping Micah and his cousin Lily. It was so great to see him stick up for Micah when he was being bullied too, some days in J.K.'s story I could really see him doing that. And although I really love being in Severus' head, it would be interesting to get some of what Harry's thinking...possible sequel? Although that would make the story be extremely overdone, but I would read it! I also like your new spin on Occlumency. It's fun to see Severus react to 'being' Harry in his memories, and I hadn't imagined it that way, but it's certainly entertaining. I also like using a room or 'maze' type of configuration to sort of trap the looker. It does make sense that it would work better than a solid wall or similar structure. I also adore this chapter, for no apparent reason other than it's brilliant to see Snape and Dumbledore (Snape especially) yell at Fudge...and for Fudge to reply with that awesome line from MASH. My whole family watches MASH and we own all the DVDs, and I've seen 99.9% of the episodes, and yet I was still unable to make the connection...time for a MASH marathon! But I do love it when authors pull from other sources than just Harry Potter alone; something I hope to master. Well, I'll update some time soon, probably on the last chapter and maybe on ff.net. But, I just wanted to let you know that it was a good idea to post here too! Good luck with any other projects you've got going on.
When Harry says Fudge is nutters.. it should be nuts.. nutters is plural.. as in 'the twins are a pair of nutters'..one person alone is nuts.. sorry.. I know it seems picky.. it's a britpick thing I guess...lol |
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