| Title: I'm Tired and I Don't Want to Walk Anymore
| 03 Jan 2008 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous)
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May I just say, Wow. I wasn't pulled into the istory in the first chapter but was interested enough to continue. I'm SO glad I did. This is magnificent. There are so many things I love about it. Your chapter titles (especially the repeating In the Middle of the Night), the little quotes at the beginning of each chapter, Snape's extremely witty inner dialogue, the progression of your plot, your personifications of Snape, Minerva and Mad-Eye Moody especially. I expected I would review at the end of each chapter but then there was another gem waiting for me and I couldn't stop reading long enough to type some comments! What a gift you have for story telling and what a gift for us to have you share it. Watching and waiting for more, Quinn
| Title: I'm Tired and I Don't Want to Walk Anymore
| 03 Jan 2008 5:06 am
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| Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed)
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