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Reviews For River of Dreams
Title: And It's so Hard to Cross 18 Apr 2009 11:59 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the trip through the Chamber! It makes sense that Sytherin might have actually stored documents and magical objects in that secure place. The presence of the tunnel warren certainly indicates a very complex area - maybe there will be other findings later on?
Title: And It's so Hard to Cross 22 Jan 2008 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe, I donĀ“t reckon Harry will have so nice time anytime in the future. Nor will he be out of the professors sight anytime soon, especially certain professor. That sure is a long fick and it took quite a few days to get it read but finally. I`m real curious about those papers. Besides there is quite a nice conversating coming surely between Alastor and Severus about this new r0;relationshipr1;. I sure am looking forward to seeing a new chappy!
Title: And It's so Hard to Cross 19 Jan 2008 7:23 am
Reviewer: mwc (Signed) [Report This]
    i've been reading your story as you've been posting and i really wish i had reviewed as i read, because there was so much to mention and i can't remember it all. using the "river of dreams" song for your chapters was the kind of idea that a person sees and wishes they could have come up with themselves. i love, love, love your snape. i think it is my favorite portrayal of him. in my mind the mix of attitude and determination and grump and formality and absolute sarcasm make him perfect. i could only hope to write him so well. i also love the harry interaction. not to mention the story line itself is absorbing. as in it's 1 o'clock in the morning and i have to go to work in a couple of hours but i can't put it down absorbing. you have a wonderful gift. can't wait to read more. =)
Title: And It's so Hard to Cross 10 Jan 2008 1:57 pm
Reviewer: Luinel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have been really enjoying this story. Lots of wonderful, enjoyable snark and watching Harry's actions from Snape's perspective is very entertaining in a nerve-wracking way...

    I imagine that Snape's injuries were caused by particularly virulent dark magic? Because otherwise they can just regenerate limbs and body parts. And if his eye can't be regenerated why didn't he bother to get a magical replacement ASAP?
    I am also not entirely sure why his better relationship with Harry is still supposed to be a secret. After all, he is not spying on Voldy anymore.

    Well, in any case I am waiting for the next installment with bated breath. Good job!
Title: And It's so Hard to Cross 08 Jan 2008 9:01 pm
Reviewer: Amethyst (Signed) [Report This]
    brilliant plot. can't wait to see what happens next
Title: And It's so Hard to Cross 08 Jan 2008 8:09 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Im SO very happy you updated! Another spectacular couple of chapters, I'm glad you posted two, it made me even more happy. These last two were especially entertaining, the comments cracked me up. I think your Chamber ideas were very good, very plausable. Excellant job, PLEASE update again soon! I'd be the happiest person in the world if you did.

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