| Title: I Try to Cross to the Opposite Side
| 19 Apr 2009 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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Poor Snape!!! Now the kindergarten set is trying to heal him!! Poor Poppy, just doing her very best to get him the help he needs!! How fortunate he ran into Moody - someone he can trade insults with who will understand better than any of the healers Poppy brings around. I love the exchanges Snape and Moody have whenever they meet!
| Title: I Try to Cross to the Opposite Side
| 23 Feb 2008 6:51 am
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| Reviewer: FoxxNyara (Anonymous)
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I am absolutely loving this story. The malice and sarcasm are excellent. I love Severus's inner monologues, they are incredibly witty. I hate it when you read a fic that has him using substandard prose, and the fact that you go to the effort of making him sound believable is wonderful.
| Title: I Try to Cross to the Opposite Side
| 23 Feb 2008 5:12 am
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| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed)
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I reread most of your story tonight and love it!!
It seems to me that your story really concentrates on Snape. I like hearing his thoughts and, indeed, they have made the story a fun experience to read. I have been laughing all the way through.
There is plenty of relationship growing between him and Harry, but it is definitely not overdone. I think he does like Harry, but it's been a slow growing of tolerance. He's probably not even sure what he feels and probably doesn't even care to know what he feels right now.
Anyway, great story!
Linda
Sadly, I have been remiss in reviewing this wonderful story. I have followed it since the beginning and have laughed and cheered.
While drinking a diet coke, I read these lines
Hexing Aurors is bad. Hexing colleagues is frowned upon. Hexing other Order members is counterproductive. No matter how badly they deserve it. “Just out of curiosity, how many times have you been hexed by someone on our side when he finally lost patience with your paranoia? No need to be specific, a round number will do.”
After cleaning up my monitor from the diet coke spew, I realized that I had to tell you how great this is. You have truly captured Snape and Moody.
Thank you, thank you.
| Title: I Try to Cross to the Opposite Side
| 22 Feb 2008 10:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love your interaction between Moody and Snape. :)
I'm so happy you updated! I love reading this story, you do Severus and everyone else's character so well. Your chapters are always amazing and entertaining to read, you've got great material with everyone of them. Your story is very original and it's full of interesting ideas. You are an excellent writer. I enjoy read every chapter. PLEASE post again soon! I LOVE this story, it is one of my absolute favorites. Please.
| Title: I Try to Cross to the Opposite Side
| 22 Feb 2008 6:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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What a lovely surprise to find a new chapter to your story. I really enjoyed it, as usual. The only thing that seems to be going well for Snape at the moment is that the rabbit is no longer living in his cauldron. His interactions with the Hogwarts staff make for hilarious reading. He gets no respect and is treated like a wayward child. No wonder he's in a perpetual snit!
Keep on writing, I'm waiting to see what you come up with next.
| Title: I Try to Cross to the Opposite Side
| 22 Feb 2008 1:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Snape's interaction with Moody in your fic is priceless :). And all the mind-healers are really funny. I guess that Snape will end this rigmarole by talking to Moody - might do both of them a lot of good, actually.
I am not sure that Snape would try to keep Harry in the dark as much as everybody else does though, now that they have a positive relationship. It is an obvious mistake and due to other characters desire to keep Harry a child. IMHO, Snape is too clear-thinking and blunt for that, particularly since it appears that Harry is gearing up for another hare-brained adventure.
Good work, it is always a pleasure to see an update to your story.
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