| Title: So I Can Finally Find
| 19 Aug 2009 2:34 am
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| Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous)
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I very MUCH enjoyed your version of this event. I believe I like it even better than the other. Thanks for a beautifully written and choreographed battle.
| Title: So I Can Finally Find
| 08 Mar 2008 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!
| Title: So I Can Finally Find
| 07 Mar 2008 10:58 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Oh no! That was a fun chapter though. I loved all the action. You write it very well.
I have to admit (I know, I'm lame) that I didn't notice the chapter titles are the lines of the song and I thought that was awesome. But in my defense, I only starting reading this last update and read it all without looking at the main page mostly. Anyways, love the chapter titles and the title as well. Great story and can't wait for an update. Your Sev is perfect! :o)
EEK! Cliffie! Can't wait for the next chapter, this one was great! (Love the twins, btw.)
Thanks so much!
-Elise
Excellent retelling of the battle.
Ron's rambling were so funny ("vampire" " bat", etc). Again, the hilight of the story was Severus's thought. I almost choked on my diet coke with this one : “The flaming X’s are the ones Potter and the rest of the dunderheads have apparently ruled out; we’re going through the rest one by one until they’re found.” And executed.
As for Moody and Severus, really, two grown men should know better than to beat each other with spells during a war when they might be needed at any time.
This is one of the few stories in which I like Moody.
Thank you so much for this story.
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