| Title: What I've Been Looking For
| 19 Apr 2009 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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I LOVE your reimagining of the Hall of Prophecies battle!!! It flows very well from the story you have presented so far, and I can just hear Snape berating Harry about his foolishness in taking his "little friends" with him! What a great set of chapters!!!
| Title: What I've Been Looking For
| 07 Apr 2008 6:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhea (Signed)
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It was great! I absolutly like the relationship between Harry and Severus in yor story.
Wow! What a chapter! I enjoyed your treatment of the Dept. of Mysteries much more than Rowling's.
| Title: What I've Been Looking For
| 26 Mar 2008 10:33 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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"This is why children should be kept in cages until they're twenty-five." ROFL That was great. I love your Snape. He's awesome. I am really, really hoping for Severus to finish his tongue-lashing. Hee hee. I love how snarky he is. I am curioius about why Dumbledore wants to talk to Harry as well. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great work this one! Thanks.
When I noticed you updated this story, I clicked on it faster then you could blink! This chapter was really great, just as excieting as the last. The battle that you edited around from Rowling's version was extreamly well put together and the details brilliant. What Harry described to seeing and the reason why he went after Bellatrix was both saddening and nauseating, I agree with Harry's sentiments. You write Severus amazingly well, I always enjoy reading your story because you capture the character just right. I was especially amused when reading his comments and thoughts about Fudge. This story is absolutly a true joy to read; the contnet is always brilliant and beautiful work, the characters sound just as they should, they way you edit cannon events with your own ideas is geat, and you have the perfect combination of seriousness and humor. You have a great story here and I can not wait for the next chapter! PLEASE, post again as soon as you possibly can. You made my day by posting this update.
I love your Severus. I'm sure I've told you that before but every chapter I read make the feeling grow.
Excellent chapter and I can't wait for an update!
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