It worries me that he hasn't read the note from Narcissa yet.
| Title: I Go Walking in My Sleep
| 19 Apr 2009 3:22 am
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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Why does it seem like Snape has to mop up everyone elses messes?!?! (Because he can!!) I sure hope you give him a good night's sleep in the near future - he had had way to much too handle in the last 48 hours or so. Of course, we now have an evil cliffhanger, and are most anxious to see what mess Snape will need to fix next!!
Thanks so much for updating this great story!!!
I never saw the verb "haring" before, and you've used it three times. So, judging from the context, it means "running rapidly, like a hare"?
Thanks for all your work--this is a pleasure to read. More, more, please!
| Title: I Go Walking in My Sleep
| 23 Jul 2008 6:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous)
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omg this is one of the best stories i've read in a while! Great great great job, i really thought snape was going to slap harry back there, whooh! intense 10/10
If you're bothering to read this, I apologize for the late review. However, I've been very busy lately and not had time to stop by the site 'till now.
Well, that experience at the station was certainly interesting, quite creepy that Voldemort himself seems to have show up as well. McGonagall defiantly knows how to irritate Snape, lol, he sure didn't appreciate being sent to the infirmary, if his inner thoughts (which were really funny!) were anything to go by.
Lots of shouting and arguing between Snape ad Harry. I understand what Snape is trying to get across, but I also see what Harry is trying to explain as well. The two aren’t on the best of terms with each other right now.
I'm very curious about whom this letter is from. I also wonder about the letter Narcissa gave Snape at the station. Hope to see your next update soon!
An excellent chapter though I was a bit confused about where the Floo station was. After reading the last chapter I thought it was in London and then it turned out to be in Perth. Regardless I was on the edge of my seat when I realised that Voldemort and his Deatheaters were there and I almost fell out of my chair with relief when Severus managed to use the Portkey. The "discussion" was execllently written and I could feel Snape's aggravation and frustration. Are we going to find out what is on the parchment that Narcissa gave to Severus? Great job!
merlin forbid that severus say he *cares* about harry and doesn't want him to get killed .... ;')
i've missed this story! it seems ages since i read it first and this chapter just reminded me how fab it is, i had to go back a chapter to remind myself what was going on and the part last chapter with sev and moody made me chuckle again, i love those 2 and hope there will be more of them soon!
Huzzah for the update XD Thanks for taking some time out of RL to get this out. I'd forgotten how awesome your version of Snape was. Thankyou for the reminder :D
The scene at the floo station was interesting. I imagined it sort of like a large train station, but with floos instead. They still had ticket barriers though for some reason. Weird.
I really like the way you write Snape. Sort of Canon still, how he might have behaved if he had liked Harry. Very independent.
I take it the letter is from Draco?
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