That Goyle is horrible, and poor Harry. However is he to fight Moldie Voldie! Nice beginning. I can't wait to see a seven-year-old Harry.
I love this story. Your writing is very good. The fact that Snape didn't immediately fall into the Harry Potter fan club head over heals is also a good indication that it's going to be an excellent story.
This is great! I really am enjoying it!
Intriguing to say the least. You've got me hooked.
| Title: Of Beginnings
| 17 Jan 2008 6:16 am
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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It was nice and I liked it very, very much. Now, I am going to go and read the other chapters before I burst out because of irritating curiousity!-hehe-
Very interesting start. I look forward to seeing how this story progresses. I was a transcriptionist for 15 years and also edited those transcriptions for grammer and spelling. Contact me if you would like me to beta.
Excellent beginnin! Very well written. Looking forward to more.
| Title: Of Beginnings
| 31 Dec 2007 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: elsey snape (Anonymous)
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good story so far. I can beta if you still need one. Never done it before but I'm pretty good at finding errors. If you're interested my email is listed on fanfiction.net in my profile under elsey snape.
This seems like it will be a really nice fic :) I love de-aging stories, so I'm happy someone else has stepped forward to do one.
I'd be happy to beta those four chapters for you. I can't promise a whole lot past that point (school is starting up again and my schedule is looking very fearsome at the moment) but I'd be happy to help you get started if anything else. Just let me know :)
Keira
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