Whooo! Great chapter! I really enjoyed your descriptions of little Harry from Snape's point of view. :) I also like your Dumbledore a lot. He's business oriented with this new problem, but planning all sorts of plans. You managed to capture his character perfectly in that regard. :) I do wish that there would have been more physical descriptions of the characters, though. And just how did "little Potter" describe Snape to the headmaster? :) Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. i'll try to work on descriptions more. I do beleive Harry's perspective will be coming up in the next few chapters. you'll find out. XD
Oh, I love chapters in Severus's perspective! This was great :) You've made Harry adorable, but not too cutsie...if that makes sense... I laughed at the repetition of idiot in this line:
"I shook my head in disgust. The boy was an idiot for trying to use a spell he knew nothing about and his father was an idiot for leaving a book about the house for his idiot son to read."
**lol...that was great :)
Enjoyed this chapter! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I have much fun writing for Snape. But it's so hard! XD
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