Nasty cliffhanger that. I can't wait for more.
I like that you wrote this in first person and especially in Snape's pov. First person gives it a level of intimacy that brings the story to life. And Snape's pov is always a fun read. :-)
Intriguing to say the least. You've got me hooked.
Aah! Cliffie!
I can't wait to know what's going on with little Harry!
(he's so cute, I love de-aged stories)
This is a great fic, very original plot. Can't wait to see how Sev will react.
-Elise
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| 18 Jan 2008 2:26 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Ah out of the mouths of babes! And how the hell do you explain that to a child! lol, have fun.
Eeep! Poor Harry! And poor Severus, too! I'm surprised that our esteemed Potions Master didn't have a heart atack at that last revelation.
This is an excellent story and I look forward to it's continuance.
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| 17 Jan 2008 12:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Wow, talk about a slap in the face for poor Severus. I hope poor Harry dosn't get so scared again, stupid Dursleys and Voldemort! Hopefully Severus will be able to calm Harry down and they can eventually get along. PLEASE post again soon!
Good chapter! The ending makes me wonder just what Snape will say to convince the boy to trust him. Great story so far and I look forward to reading more soon!
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| 17 Jan 2008 6:38 am
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Short but with a nasty cliffy, isn't it? humph! Anyway, it was a nice chapter and Snape really doesn't know how to deal with a seven year old. -smiles-
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