Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Of Youth 03 Jan 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love chapters in Severus's perspective! This was great :) You've made Harry adorable, but not too cutsie...if that makes sense... I laughed at the repetition of idiot in this line:

    "I shook my head in disgust. The boy was an idiot for trying to use a spell he knew nothing about and his father was an idiot for leaving a book about the house for his idiot son to read."

    **lol...that was great :)

    Enjoyed this chapter! Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thanks!!  I have much fun writing for Snape. But it's so hard! XD
Title: Of Beginnings 01 Jan 2008 11:46 pm
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting start. I look forward to seeing how this story progresses. I was a transcriptionist for 15 years and also edited those transcriptions for grammer and spelling. Contact me if you would like me to beta.
Title: Of Beginnings 31 Dec 2007 11:23 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start.
Title: Of Beginnings 31 Dec 2007 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent beginnin! Very well written. Looking forward to more.
Title: Of Beginnings 31 Dec 2007 2:19 am
Reviewer: elsey snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good story so far. I can beta if you still need one. Never done it before but I'm pretty good at finding errors. If you're interested my email is listed on fanfiction.net in my profile under elsey snape.
Title: Of Beginnings 31 Dec 2007 12:01 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    This seems like it will be a really nice fic :) I love de-aging stories, so I'm happy someone else has stepped forward to do one.

    I'd be happy to beta those four chapters for you. I can't promise a whole lot past that point (school is starting up again and my schedule is looking very fearsome at the moment) but I'd be happy to help you get started if anything else. Just let me know :)

    Keira
Title: Of Beginnings 30 Dec 2007 9:31 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    I noticed in the comments box this is your first story I believe, and so I thought I'd review b/c new authors need them :D. So, I will say this so far is intriguing, and seems like it'll develop into a good story. so, I will be awaiting the update.
Title: Of Beginnings 30 Dec 2007 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    So I think from what we've seen so far that Harry will be de-aged in the next chapter or so. I like deaged fics so I'll be watching for the next update.
Title: Of Beginnings 30 Dec 2007 8:29 pm
Reviewer: jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great beginning! hope you get that beta, can't wait to read more.
Title: Of Beginnings 30 Dec 2007 8:11 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start. I'm curious to see where this will go and I hope you'll be able to update again soon!

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