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Reviews For Come What May
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I loved how Harry and the others bested Umbridge, but I'm not sure she's gone for good. She's probably just regrouping. And you know, if students are justified to rebel against abusive professors, maybe they'd be justified in rebelling against Severus, too. But probably emotional abuse doesn't count, hmm? It was a fabulous chapter, very well-written! Looking forward to the next one! Author's Response: Yes, there is more, much more. Hope your response to what's coming won't be the same as others, (wince). I'm afraid it seems I have been very mean to Harry. I think emotionasl abuse does count as somethingthgat could get Severus in trouble. Now though, the students have seen someone a lot worse then Snape. Snape never made them cut lines into their own hands. That's just sadistic and she needs to be punished. Severus spits out hurtfull words and most of the school may hate him but I think Umbridge is worse by far. Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: I'll take that as a complimite, :P
I was laughing and fearing for Harry when the first memory appeared. I actually cringed at the offering of an apology--Harry hanging his cousin upside down unprovoked, laughing, taunting and threatening him. It's rather unfortunate that Harry did so well in making his potion acceptable. I'm obsessing over the next chapter already. Please update soon. I'd like to see the class' reaction to Harry's sorting, or his trip to getting his wand, the revealing of the brother wand, and Harry's potential for greatness. But I've read the books enough, I'm much more interested in seeing new memories. Oh! Harry with Sirius at Grimmauld...update! Author's Response: Your so sweet! Thank you so much, when I read the first sentence, (Thats it) I was momentairly worried! :) I'm so glad you liked it! A lot of the thing you want to see are in the next chapter! So I hope you enjoy!
Hmmm, memories. how about these: First year: When the Dursley house is raining Hogwarts letters. When Harry meets Hagrid. When Harry meets Ron and Hermione. The zoo scene where the snake gets free. Second year: When Snape 'dueld' Lockheart and sent the doof flying. When Ron and Harry are in the Whomping Willow leading up to them going to Snape's office. The Chamber of Secrets. Ron and Harry's trip/drive to Hogwarts. The confrontation in Florish and Blots so everyone can see Lucius setting Ginny up with Riddle's diary. Third year: Aunt Marge geing 'blown up'. The dementor attack. Lupin turning into a werewolf. Harry chucking snowballs at Draco. Care of Magical creatures lesson where Buckbeak gives Draco what's comming. Hermione punching Draco. Fourth year: Harry and Ron sulking at the Yule Ball. Harry retrieving both Ron and Gabriel from the Black Lake. The Grave Yard scene. Barty Crouch Jr. being interogated after changing back. Fifth year: Umbridge's detention, so her cruelty is revield to Snape and she can get kicked out of Hogwarts. Author's Response: Thanks for so many memory ideas Beth! I will certainly be using some of them. :D I’m glad you liked my potion. I really like the fics where Harry's memories are revealed to people. It’s very interesting to see there responses. I've only read like three fics where this happens and only two or three people see the memories. I decided to be really mean to Harry and reveal them to a whole class of his friends and enemies. I can’t wait to write there responses even though I’m not sure what will happen, Lol. J Thanks again for reviewing! Scorpia |
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