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Reviews For Come What May
The only thing I found really off was "The Syltherins were guilty of open mouths as they watched the memory ‘Pampered Potter’ and his aunt." I thought it was too dramatic; i'd understand if it was a Slytherin student but not the group. And there's never been any indication as to whether they thought him pampered at home or not. But then again, the school and teachers tend to indulge Harry. One aspect I really appreciated was your description of the class's reaction, the moments where you described them in groups (Slytherin's certainty that Harry would hex the younger student) to when you didn't distinguish from Slytherin or Gryffindor. Like when Harry was locked out: "Slowly looks of realization were spreading amongst the confused students." I can't get over the memories. I feel like singing praise. Padfoot's morning greeting, Harry's preemptive strike against Dudley in the previous chapter, the hope roused from a slyterin when harry's own house questioned him--it was wonderful! I wish there was more. Please update soon! The rest of my day is going to feel insignificant and empty now. I can't wait to read your next chapter. I want to see the class's reaction; it's too bad how quickly secrets travel at Hogwarts. Author's Response: I must say that you really know how to flatter a writer! I don't think I'll ever get my head back to it's originall size, Lol. Your right though, the Syltherins reactions as a entire class were overdone. I'll fix that quickly, :). Thanks for pointing it out. I found more memories that I wished I would have added to the chapter after I had posted it. I'm still mad at myself for not thinking of some of them sooner, sigh, oh well. I was happy with the Sirius memory as well, I always thought that Sirius should have been more...um...fatherly? towards Harry. Well, maybe he'll get a chance to do so in this fic. Harry's secrets will travel like the flu. Thanks again so much for the reviews!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll write it & post it as soon as I get time. :) P.S. I love your pen name, :) It reminds me of this rime called the Purple People Eater that I heard aLONG time ago. Scorpia
Author's Response: Thanks & I will update as soon as I can! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the memories, It's sad that there won't be anymore. I was having fun writing them! My mom won't read fanfiction, sigh. She has no idead what she is mising! Snape & Harry fanfics are wondeful. Thanks for the review, you made #50!! Scorpia
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks so much! I'm already writing the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
P.S. Interesting 'long tailed cat' comment, though my cat wouldn't approve, lol. Author's Response: Lol Beth! Me & my friend though your (My cat wouldn't approve commit) was so funny! Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I'll make the next chapter long too and I'll post it as soon as I can.
Author's Response: Okay, I'll make sure to check that, thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Alexis! I'm writing the next chapter now and I'll get it to you as soon as I feel I've tortured you enough. Lol, Just jokin! Thanks for the review!
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