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Title: Chapter 22: Patience 25 Sep 2008 12:32 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool story! I'd just have to feel a little resentment and anxiety over the throat thing. How scary to have your throat cut! Hope his vocal cords aren't damaged. You'd think if his airway was compromised he'd be dead though and unable to drink. You just know Harry will get flak out of being marked again and this time as a follower.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not sure how cut throats work, I didn't go into a deep study for the story. Just where the cut would need to be and how deep...boy, I sound creepy. :)
Title: Chapter 22: Patience 24 Sep 2008 10:36 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter, i have forgiven you for making harry a death eater, don't give me to many scares like that again, but what happens when harry goes back to school?
    lucius coming over to the light, what is the world coming to?

    Author's Response: The worlds gone crazy, sorry you're the last person to learn this, :P Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 22: Patience 24 Sep 2008 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    And you shall get them my dear; because that was absolutely brilliant. I never thought that I would admire Narcissa and Lucius, but they seem to really care for Draco in this story. I like that; it's an original take on the usual "Lucius is a bastard" stories. Although, they do make for a nice angsty story.

    I wish that Harry had someone to love and take care of HIM that way. Any chance of his relationship with Snape developing into a more father-figure one; such as a guardian?

    I like mentor stories, but when the author is as brilliant as YOU are and make the reader emphasize so deeply with Harry and Snape--I'm just left wanting the close relationship to develop even more.

    Author's Response: It will, patience will be rewarded! I'm deeply flattered, but the story won't be devoleping more until the sequel. I want the sequel to be better. As my first major story; CWM has hit a lot of rough spots. I've learned from them, and I am working on perfecting my writing. :) Thanks!
Title: Chapter 22: Patience 24 Sep 2008 5:48 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter and a much needed calm time after the pulse-pounding events of the previous chapters. I like your Narcissa, already she is far more 3-dimensional than most other fanfic Narcissas (or even JKR's!)

    You're going great. Keep it up!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Narcissa scares me, lol. She's a great character and I don't want her to seem to lame (because I beleive she is a great character...as I already said, lol). Thank you!

Title: Chapter 22: Patience 24 Sep 2008 5:13 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Beg not - the story is so good. I am glad to see that future Harry has influenced his past self.

    Hmmm, where is Sirius? (not that I want the mutt interfering with Severus)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, hopefully he has influenced him for the better. I'm very happy you reviewed, thank you! :)


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