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Title: Chapter 24: Removing The Bond 08 Oct 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Still enjoying a great deal! Love have Ron chew out Draco. :D Protective Ron is really cute.

    One thing, though—doesn't it seem like Harry has gotten over the horror of his experiences a little too quickly? Just a suggestion, but I think I would add on a little more angst. :D We eat it up anyway.

    Great work, though! I'm always happy to see that you've updated.

    Author's Response: Lol, I know. A lot of people have told me that, but it's only been a day from the time he was rescued. Plenty of angst to come, :) Thank you for the suggestion and the review!
Title: Chapter 24: Removing The Bond 08 Oct 2008 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was so excited to see you updated!
    Wonderful chapter, I'm a bit sad that the bond is broken, but I think Draco and Harry gained an understanding of each other while under it, and hopefully they will continue to be civil to each other. I also loved Ron's protectiveness of Harry in this chapter :)
    Congrats on 300+ reviews!

    Author's Response:

    They have gained a slight understanding, it's not grand, and they won't be best friends anytime soon, but it's the first step towards friendship. :) Thanks for reviewing, and for the congrats!

Title: Chapter 24: Removing The Bond 08 Oct 2008 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought it was funny to hear Ron & Draco going at it and I'm glad that the bond is removed so the two boys can finally have some privacy. Sev was right, it was really insensitive of Albus to ask that harry show the others the mark--I mean they all know what it looks like, they don't need him to parade it like he was some kind of freak. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    I was wary about having Severus defend Harry, but If anyone, he would know what it felt like to be ashamed of the Dark Mark. Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 24: Removing The Bond 08 Oct 2008 1:37 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Heh! I like this one and am looking forward to what's happening next - I especially loved the bit when Draco was scared by Mrs Weasley's enthusiasm! Keep writing, I love it!

    Author's Response:

    He's going to see more of it--"Run Draco, run!" Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 24: Removing The Bond 08 Oct 2008 12:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh thank goodness that the bond was lifted, but poor Harry having the Dark Mark forced upon him.

    As usual, a moving and powerful chapter, please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    He never seems to get a break. Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 24: Removing The Bond 08 Oct 2008 7:29 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You've been doing a very nice job. Two minor tweaks (First, at about 60 lines down):"Firstly, the Malfoys have sworn their allegiance" is the proper spelling.
    The second is during the sentence after Dumbledore has asked Harry to show the others his Dark Mark. You left out the 'n' in 'against'. Personally, I feel Snape would have addressed the headmaster as "Albus" there, rather than his surname, but that's an interpretive call.
    I repeat, your story is well-written.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and pointing out those errors, I'll fix them. :)

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