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Reviews For Come What May
One thing, though—doesn't it seem like Harry has gotten over the horror of his experiences a little too quickly? Just a suggestion, but I think I would add on a little more angst. :D We eat it up anyway. Great work, though! I'm always happy to see that you've updated. Author's Response: Lol, I know. A lot of people have told me that, but it's only been a day from the time he was rescued. Plenty of angst to come, :) Thank you for the suggestion and the review!
Wonderful chapter, I'm a bit sad that the bond is broken, but I think Draco and Harry gained an understanding of each other while under it, and hopefully they will continue to be civil to each other. I also loved Ron's protectiveness of Harry in this chapter :) Congrats on 300+ reviews! Author's Response: They have gained a slight understanding, it's not grand, and they won't be best friends anytime soon, but it's the first step towards friendship. :) Thanks for reviewing, and for the congrats!
Author's Response: I was wary about having Severus defend Harry, but If anyone, he would know what it felt like to be ashamed of the Dark Mark. Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: He's going to see more of it--"Run Draco, run!" Thank you for reviewing!
As usual, a moving and powerful chapter, please update soon. Author's Response: He never seems to get a break. Thank you for reviewing!
The second is during the sentence after Dumbledore has asked Harry to show the others his Dark Mark. You left out the 'n' in 'against'. Personally, I feel Snape would have addressed the headmaster as "Albus" there, rather than his surname, but that's an interpretive call. I repeat, your story is well-written. Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and pointing out those errors, I'll fix them. :) |
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