| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 03 Sep 2023 1:26 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the great story! It was a gripping read. I’m hoping I’ll find the sequel.
I really liked this story. I feel like Harry got over the torture too quickly, other than that I really liked it.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 08 May 2021 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great story. There were some nicely unique elements in here. Looking forward to the sequel.
So good to read this again.
So good.
I'm off to look for the sequel.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 10 Feb 2017 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
I have very mixed feelings about this.
The plot and characterisation are great. I especially liked how it was not easy for Harry to persuade Snape to resume Occlumency lessons. And I was practically cheering in the scene where Draco struggles not to kill Harry.
And even though the story is sprinkled with typos, it still managed to keep my attention, which is unusual.
But.
It is unfair to tell your readers that this story is complete when it isn't. Yes, you did intend to write the sequel straight away, but it is six years later, and you clearly haven't been able to. These things happen, I do understand that. But if I had known the story was unfinished, I would have been able to avoid reading it -- and thus avoid being left in the lurch. So please, for the sake of future readers, mark this story as incomplete, or put some kind of author's note at the start, so people who prefer not to read WIPs can avoid reading this. Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 05 Apr 2014 8:16 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Really like it. Especially how you got Dumbledore to play the Malfoy's till they had to switch sides. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 04 Jan 2014 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Genuka (Signed)
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I look forward to the sequel.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 25 Oct 2011 1:05 am
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| Reviewer: Lumcer (Signed)
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This seriously needs a sequel and to be checked over for errors. A lot of off's are spelled of.
KCK-Lumcer
P.S. I'd appreciate it if you let me know if and when you post that sequel.
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