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Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow.... Did they just get along?! Eeek! What is the world coming to?? Another good chapter by the way! :)

    Author's Response: (Gasp) Did I write that? What's happening! Run! Thank you, :)
Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 5:30 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    It might be a good idea to dump both Harry and Draco in the lake. It could wash off most of the mud. I can't wait to see what Severus says about this prank.

    Author's Response: Yes, it would of been.. Sadly I already written the chapter, I did not want to change anything, lol.. Thank you.
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 12 Jun 2008 6:42 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter! I'm glad Snape wasn't horrible about Occlumency with Harry, and maybe the books can help him, too. I think I might be willing to let Hermione help if I were Harry, though. She was able to help him learn a Summoning Charm in fourth-year, when he couldn't manage it in class. And I do wonder how Hermione knew Nagini's name.

    It's sad that Harry has so much trouble thinking of a safe place, though. Poor kid, no where really is safe for him, is it? What a terrible strain.

    So I'm anxious to see if Voldemort is going to attack, and Draco's coming up...that can't be good news...

    Author's Response: Hermione could help, I'm sure of it but this is something Harry fells he needs to do alone. Although he will have help soon, it is unwanted help. Oh dear, I think you may of found a typo. Hermione did not know Nagini's name? Well....maybe no one else will notice, (snicker). I probably need to do something about that. Draco is very bad news, he is Harry's tormentor...besides me and Snape. Thank you for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving 12 Jun 2008 6:35 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, you did an excellent job with this chapter! Harry's memories were so intense, and I hope that perhaps they will spark a little compassion in Snape, and the other Slytherins. At least Snape is giving him 'remedial Potions' again, so I guess it was mission accomplished. Great job again!

    Author's Response:

    Snape's feeling will not be shown, POV change is something my beta is nitpicky over, lol. His thoughts will show in later chapters though. Thank you for the review!

Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 11 Jun 2008 10:38 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    So funny, I laughed the whole way through! One mistake I noticed which makes it really difficult to read (me anyway...) 'keep his and close' I think you mean wand not and! (; Please keep writing!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out that mistake Tabby, some times the stupidest things slip by the radar. Glad you enjoyed it, athough I'm trying to turn the humor down a bit. I don't want this to turn into a humor story when it was supposed to be drama! Lol, thank you again.
Title: Chapter 9: The Rules 11 Jun 2008 10:01 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Just one question - does Harry know about the prophecy? LOVED Draco being dragged from the hall btw! lol

    Author's Response: Harry does not know about the prochecy because Sirius did not die. So Dumbledore never got the push to tell him about it. Thank you, the ferrit will learn he can not push Harryy around, lol.
Title: Chapter 8: Punishment 11 Jun 2008 7:47 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is such a GREAT story! I love your sense of humour. And what are people complaining about? It's a fantastic punishment! I like the wide myriad of characters you have included. Umbridge is very well written.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it was a good punishment as well. The bond has more to do with the story then just punishing Harry and Malfoy.
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 09 Jun 2008 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Riley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I'M DYING HERE!I love it when Draco has a role in the story! You wrote this fic surprisingly well. I can't wait until Malfoy learns of the DA, if he ever does. Snape? Joking with Draco? Wow. That's new! lol

    Author's Response: Lol, thanks for the exciting review! I'll update as soon as I can but I'm still writing the chapter, :) Yeah, Snape has a sense of humor. Amazing right?
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 07 Jun 2008 5:09 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Classes went well, I thought it was really funny when Harry was stunned at Snape and Malfoy's banter, he sounded like he was going to pass out! lol. Glad to see you came to a decision on the animagus form, as I said, I completely agree that your stallion idea fits Harry well.

    It's a good thing for that bond, otherwise Malfoy would be a blabbermouth over Harry's Occlumency lessons. I loved Snape's comment "Potter needs to build a resistance to annoyances. You fit the job perfectly, Mr. Malfoy.” hehe. Harry sure seems to have improved though.

    Speaking of things I loved; Harry's dramatics when the Gryffindors all hugged him cracked me up! I also thought the boy's comments about Hermione 'ruining' Harry's messy bed and the 'cannibal' comment back in the Slytheirn dorms were very funny comments.

    Man, I'm desperate to find out Harry's prank! You’re killing me! *gags and coughs dramatically* lol. I bet it will be awesome, I absolutely can't wait and am anxious for your next update. I’ll try to remember to brace myself, I’ll most likely be joining Ron and foflmao [fall on floor laughing my arse off] ;)

    P.S. Hey, I just had an idea! Wouldn’t it be just like Dumbledore to someday reveal to Harry that the bond was never actually placed on him and Malfoy? I swear, if you end up doing that, I’ll die laughing.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for you detailed and LONG review. I almost joined Harry in faiting when I saw the length of the review! Please don't die! I'll have the chapter up ASAP, I have to finish writing it first though, lol. Oh Gosh! That would be SO like Dumbledore, ROFL. I bet Harry and Draco would not be amused though, lol. Sadly, there really is a bond. Thanks for your review again!

Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 06 Jun 2008 7:31 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, the occlumancy lesson was great considering whats at stake for snape and harry if anyone finds out on the dark side. harrys animagus form looks really cool and can't wait to find out what the prank is

    Author's Response: Thanks Kreacher, :). Occulemency went very well, let's hope it lasts, lol.

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