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Reviews For Come What May
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long Beth, i'll try to have the next chapter up quicker this time. :) Draco is going to be mean of course. But he will pay dearly. Bwwaaahhaha! I love the Weasleys too, big families are great fun. Thanks for the review! Scorpia
Author's Response: Thanks bunches for the tasty review! I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can. :)
Author's Response: LOL, Cliff hanger? What cliff hanger? :P Hehe, I'll get the next chapter up sooner this time! Thanks for the review! :) Scorpia
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kim! Glad you think so. :) Is AYLNO one of those stories that make Draco believable? I was curious. Scorpia
Author's Response: LOL, Thanks...I think. Hehe, I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
You haven't updated. :( I've been entertaining myself by reading the Shoutbox. It's rather disturbing. But I'm bored now. And I hope you update soon. Author's Response: I'm sorry Grimmjaw! I've been horribly busy with school and life in general. Also I have been catching up on some of my fave fics! I promise that the next chapter will be long just for you!! :) I had to edit chapter four on Ff.net. I couldn't belive that I actually misspelt Slytherin! What is anoing is that I explained why I reposted the chapter after I fixed the mistakes in the A\N's and I still had somebody ask me why I did it, (shakes head) Anyhow thanks for the review! I really LOVE them. :) Scorpia
anyways, i love what you're doing with this story and i cannot wait to read more! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the idea. :) Maybe they will see who Harry really is and not see his title.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Yeah, the memories really took up a lot of chapter space. There will be more of Harry's thoughts and feeling in the next chapter! Thanks, Scorpia
Author's Response: I told myse;f I was never going to read a time travel fic. I thought they were silly! Then I go and write one myself, Lol :) Anna my beta is the one you can thank for it being well written. She is great! I'm really glad you liked it. I'm having a small writers block as I'm writing chapter 5, :( Hopefully it will pass soon! Thanks for the review! Scorpia
The only thing I found really off was "The Syltherins were guilty of open mouths as they watched the memory ‘Pampered Potter’ and his aunt." I thought it was too dramatic; i'd understand if it was a Slytherin student but not the group. And there's never been any indication as to whether they thought him pampered at home or not. But then again, the school and teachers tend to indulge Harry. One aspect I really appreciated was your description of the class's reaction, the moments where you described them in groups (Slytherin's certainty that Harry would hex the younger student) to when you didn't distinguish from Slytherin or Gryffindor. Like when Harry was locked out: "Slowly looks of realization were spreading amongst the confused students." I can't get over the memories. I feel like singing praise. Padfoot's morning greeting, Harry's preemptive strike against Dudley in the previous chapter, the hope roused from a slyterin when harry's own house questioned him--it was wonderful! I wish there was more. Please update soon! The rest of my day is going to feel insignificant and empty now. I can't wait to read your next chapter. I want to see the class's reaction; it's too bad how quickly secrets travel at Hogwarts. Author's Response: I must say that you really know how to flatter a writer! I don't think I'll ever get my head back to it's originall size, Lol. Your right though, the Syltherins reactions as a entire class were overdone. I'll fix that quickly, :). Thanks for pointing it out. I found more memories that I wished I would have added to the chapter after I had posted it. I'm still mad at myself for not thinking of some of them sooner, sigh, oh well. I was happy with the Sirius memory as well, I always thought that Sirius should have been more...um...fatherly? towards Harry. Well, maybe he'll get a chance to do so in this fic. Harry's secrets will travel like the flu. Thanks again so much for the reviews!
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