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Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 17 Mar 2008 12:05 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad you finally updated this story! I enjoy reading it very much because you write the character's thoughts, words and actions exactly how they should be/sound. Your ideas so far for the story have been very good, the potion was very interesting, for example. I am curious about what will happen next! As for Draco, I really do not like him because he is awful to the Weasleys whom are some of my favorite characters and he is prejudice. PLEASE, please post again soon! It would mean the world to me if you did ^^.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry it's taken me so long Beth, i'll try to have the next chapter up quicker this time. :) Draco is going to be mean of course. But he will pay dearly. Bwwaaahhaha!

    I love the Weasleys too, big families are great fun. Thanks for the review!

    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 16 Mar 2008 3:27 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Sigh. Poor Harry. You're not going to make it easy for him are you. I really liked the tension you built into the Occlumency lesson as both Harry and Severus tried to be on their best behaviour.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks bunches for the tasty review! I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can. :)

     

Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 16 Mar 2008 3:20 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! All though, cliff hanger endings are soooo not cool. So pretty please update soon! I'm dying to know what all will happen next!

    Author's Response:

    LOL, Cliff hanger? What cliff hanger? :P Hehe, I'll get the next chapter up sooner this time! Thanks for the review! :)

    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 16 Mar 2008 3:08 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. Snape was really in character and so were the trio and McGonnagal. I'm dying to know what she was arguing with Dumbledore about. Draco? Hate him. Hate that stories make him good when he was anything but in canon. Some stories do it alright and make it believable but they're rare.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much Kim! Glad you think so. :) Is AYLNO one of those stories that make Draco believable? I was curious.

    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving 05 Mar 2008 6:04 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    That is insanely good!

    Author's Response: LOL, Thanks...I think. Hehe, I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving 04 Mar 2008 9:10 am
Reviewer: Grimmjaw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *nods approvingly* I noticed you edited this chapter at ff.net. The lines about the Slytherin are much better.
    You haven't updated. :(
    I've been entertaining myself by reading the Shoutbox. It's rather disturbing. But I'm bored now. And I hope you update soon.

    Author's Response:

    I'm sorry Grimmjaw! I've been horribly busy with school and life in general. Also I have been catching up on some of my fave fics! I promise that the next chapter will be long just for you!! :)

    I had to edit chapter four on Ff.net. I couldn't belive that I actually misspelt Slytherin! What is anoing is that I explained why I reposted the chapter after I fixed the mistakes in the A\N's and I still had somebody ask me why I did it, (shakes head) Anyhow thanks for the review! I really LOVE them. :)

    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving 27 Feb 2008 5:05 pm
Reviewer: chalicity (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome! i love the idea of the whole class forced to experience harry's memories - the good and the not-so-good: i think it gives the same year gryffies and slytherins a lot to think about! poor harry... he deserves some people knowing him and not his title...

    anyways, i love what you're doing with this story and i cannot wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the idea. :) Maybe they will see who Harry really is and not see his title.
Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving 26 Feb 2008 7:44 pm
Reviewer: VampireOfTheLibrary (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter! I really liked the memories but there wasn't a lot of Harry's thoghts or feeling in this chapter. I hope there will be some in the next one. X) Can't wait!

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked it. Yeah, the memories really took up a lot of chapter space. There will be more of Harry's thoughts and feeling in  the next chapter!

    Thanks, Scorpia

Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving 26 Feb 2008 4:38 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    For some reason, I initially resisted reading this story. Once I started, I realized that it's so well written that I can't wait for the next chapters. I hope it's a long story. Just a superb job, Scorpia!:)

    Author's Response:

    I told myse;f I was never going to read a time travel fic. I thought they were silly! Then I go and write one myself, Lol :)

    Anna my beta is the one you can thank for it being well written. She is great! I'm really glad you liked it. I'm having a small writers block as I'm writing chapter 5, :(

    Hopefully it will pass soon! Thanks for the review!

    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving 25 Feb 2008 3:52 am
Reviewer: Grimmjaw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I had to read this chapter four times in a row before the europhia finally vanished. I basked in the feeling for a more morements. You did the scene with Sirius very well. I loved the tones of the transitions going from fluff to ominous and the random sequence of memories. And I loved that Sirius's transformation was revealed to the class, but his innocence left ambiguous. It's really rather ironic that it seems like Harry's primary motivation for going through with this apology was to save Sirius only to damn him with giving away sensitive knowledge to the wizarding world.
    The only thing I found really off was "The Syltherins were guilty of open mouths as they watched the memory ‘Pampered Potter’ and his aunt." I thought it was too dramatic; i'd understand if it was a Slytherin student but not the group. And there's never been any indication as to whether they thought him pampered at home or not. But then again, the school and teachers tend to indulge Harry.
    One aspect I really appreciated was your description of the class's reaction, the moments where you described them in groups (Slytherin's certainty that Harry would hex the younger student) to when you didn't distinguish from Slytherin or Gryffindor. Like when Harry was locked out: "Slowly looks of realization were spreading amongst the confused students."
    I can't get over the memories. I feel like singing praise. Padfoot's morning greeting, Harry's preemptive strike against Dudley in the previous chapter, the hope roused from a slyterin when harry's own house questioned him--it was wonderful! I wish there was more.
    Please update soon! The rest of my day is going to feel insignificant and empty now. I can't wait to read your next chapter. I want to see the class's reaction; it's too bad how quickly secrets travel at Hogwarts.

    Author's Response:

    I must say that you really know how to flatter a writer! I don't think I'll ever get my head back to it's originall size, Lol.

    Your right though, the Syltherins reactions as a entire class were overdone. I'll fix that quickly, :).  Thanks for pointing it out. I found more memories that I wished I would have added to the chapter after I had posted it. I'm still mad at myself for not thinking of some of them sooner, sigh, oh well. I was happy with the Sirius memory as well, I always thought that Sirius should have been more...um...fatherly? towards Harry. Well, maybe he'll get a chance to do so in this fic. Harry's secrets will travel like the flu.

    Thanks again so much for the reviews!

     

     


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