Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Engravings 23 Jan 2008 11:55 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Exciting chapter. Did Snape get Harry's wand? ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Actually I just thought of that myself :D I have to think what I will do with this..

    Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Title: Two words 15 Jan 2008 1:51 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, now what is on the back of that picture? Very intriguing. And I'm sure that Harry AND Severus are now feeling like no good deed goes unpunished. ;-)

    Author's Response: Thank you for your kind reviews! I'm happy that you find it intriguing :), and you're right, no good deed goes unpunished here!
Title: What's rightfully yours 15 Jan 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    You are doing a very good job setting up a post-DH scenario where Harry and Snape can sort out their relationship. I appreciate you noting that English is a second language, but I only noticed a very few places where that is obvious. I'm looking forward to what you do with this story.
Title: What's rightfully yours 14 Jan 2008 10:53 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I was sorry to read that you are obviously one of the people down of DD.

    I don't think Harry was at the end of DH. He couldn't wait to speak to DD's portrait and it was not to abuse him.

    Plus, he called one of his kids Albus.

    Harry had a terribly hard time at Hogwarts, but DD kept him as safe as he could whilst doing everything that he could to make sure Harry was ready for the final confrontation and that his chances of survival were very high.

    DD had it right, even though it was not an easy road for Harry.

    Sorry, just my opinion.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reviewing!  :)

    I know what you mean and I agree with you. It will just take some time for Harry to understand Dumbledore. The war is still fresh in his mind and he does't really know what to feel.

     Nilla

Title: Forgiven or forgotten 14 Jan 2008 10:42 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting, though it is sad that HArry feels he has to be on his own and away from the people who love him.

    Obviously, your Harry needs time out
Title: Two words 14 Jan 2008 8:12 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Your story is looking pretty good! I loved the first four chapters. I wasn't sure, at first, that Harry was still at school in your story. I was happy to see that he was. I like the way you've written this and I hope to see lots more, soon.

    Author's Response: Im so glad you liked it! I will try to write more soon :)
Title: Two words 14 Jan 2008 4:41 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A wonderful beginning to your story. The tension between Snape and Harry comes across beautifully. Love to read more of this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to update sometime soon. :)

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