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Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 21 Jul 2009 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooo, nice lie Sev. As ludicrous as the idea of two fathers is, you pull it off very well! I like this story a lot! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 24 Jan 2008 4:14 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice twist on the Severitus angle. I'm enjoying your story.

    I must confess that when Harry called Snape "Dad" I just about lost my coffee in laughter. Thanks.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you CeeCeeMee for your review.

    I'm very glad that you are enjoying the story and I hope you get a few more laughs.

Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 18 Jan 2008 6:02 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I love how protective Hagrid is, and the conversation between Dumbledore and Severus was interesting...you've put a lot of thought into how Severus and Harry are related.

    And I loved Harry's interaction with Severus, too!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Kristeh for your review.

     I love Hagrid and I think he will always be protective of Harry becuase he rescued him from Godric's Hollow. I think a bond was formed then.

    There have been a few fics about 'Blood' themes and I really had to think carefully about how out there it would be to have two fathers. But I figured that if we can have male pregnancies in the magical world, three lots of genetic material would be acceptable.

    I think I have made it seem realistic enough. Hope so anyway.

     

Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 17 Jan 2008 11:13 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Marvellous!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you Rhia. Succinct, but appreciated all the same.
Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 17 Jan 2008 8:07 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry calling Snape dad, even as a joke, was very unexpected. Poor Snape was quite shocked there. Great chapter and and I am loving the constant updates!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Alexis, for another review.

    Yes, Severus was very shocked, what with his present worries about what he will discover with the paternity test.

    Of course, deep down, he has to know there can be no other explanation for the birthmark.

Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 17 Jan 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: Katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love how you decided to make Snape Harry's father, very original (or at least, new to me :) You are a brilliant writer

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Katie for your thoughts on my writing. I do try very hard.

    At 55 years of age, and being a very prolific reader, I have had a lot of time to take on board how to write. I was also very good at English at school.

    I am very fussy with correct spelling and correct grammar. 'Tenses' in particular are a sore point with me. I find some writers have trouble keeping their past, present and future tenses straight. They can change tenses in the same sentence.

    Saying all that, no-one is perfect and we all make mistakes that others pick up on.

    Still, it is heartening to know you enjoy the story so much and that you like my writing style.

Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 17 Jan 2008 2:51 am
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story. A very interesting take on the Sevitus theme. You write Severus and Harry in a very believable way. The tension and angst is very good and you keep me anxious for any new developments in their relationship. I also like the Albus-Minerva ship and you are doing that well too. Please continue posting this interesting and well written story. Quinn

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Quinn. Your review is much appreciated.

    It is always exceedingly pleasing when people tell me that I write well and that my characterisations are believable.

    I really try to keep everyone as close to canon as these AUs allow.

    Very glad you approve of Albus and Minerva.

    Keep reading and hope to hear from you again


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