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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
Author's Response: Thank you. Lesley~
I must confess that when Harry called Snape "Dad" I just about lost my coffee in laughter. Thanks. Author's Response: Thank you CeeCeeMee for your review. I'm very glad that you are enjoying the story and I hope you get a few more laughs.
And I loved Harry's interaction with Severus, too! Author's Response: Thanks Kristeh for your review. I love Hagrid and I think he will always be protective of Harry becuase he rescued him from Godric's Hollow. I think a bond was formed then. There have been a few fics about 'Blood' themes and I really had to think carefully about how out there it would be to have two fathers. But I figured that if we can have male pregnancies in the magical world, three lots of genetic material would be acceptable. I think I have made it seem realistic enough. Hope so anyway.
Author's Response: Thank you Rhia. Succinct, but appreciated all the same.
Author's Response: Thanks Alexis, for another review. Yes, Severus was very shocked, what with his present worries about what he will discover with the paternity test. Of course, deep down, he has to know there can be no other explanation for the birthmark.
Author's Response: Thanks Katie for your thoughts on my writing. I do try very hard. At 55 years of age, and being a very prolific reader, I have had a lot of time to take on board how to write. I was also very good at English at school. I am very fussy with correct spelling and correct grammar. 'Tenses' in particular are a sore point with me. I find some writers have trouble keeping their past, present and future tenses straight. They can change tenses in the same sentence. Saying all that, no-one is perfect and we all make mistakes that others pick up on. Still, it is heartening to know you enjoy the story so much and that you like my writing style.
Author's Response: Thank you Quinn. Your review is much appreciated. It is always exceedingly pleasing when people tell me that I write well and that my characterisations are believable. I really try to keep everyone as close to canon as these AUs allow. Very glad you approve of Albus and Minerva. Keep reading and hope to hear from you again |
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