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Title: Chapter 7: Gryffindor vs Slytherin 22 Jul 2009 5:51 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Just love Snape being Snape and Harry acting like the typical teenager!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I love someone reviewing all the chapters. I love writing snarky Sev and bull-headed and often belligerent Harry.

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 7: Gryffindor vs Slytherin 19 Jan 2008 11:27 pm
Reviewer: Little Sun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi! I like this story very much! It is a good idea with the blood transfusion. Majority of time you have Harry and Severus nicely in canon character, from time to time you are slipping (Snape not reacting to Harry's very rude comments etc), but not too often, so that is OK. I hope you will update soon, because I am really curious what will happen, if the jewel poisoned was meant for Harry or for who it was intended (it crossed my mind that maybe Nott wanted to poison Malfoy for some reason or other), if Harry will go to Dursleys or not, etc. etc. I am looking forward reading more of your story. Ups, I guess the comments are not supposed to be so long. LilSun

    Author's Response:

    Hi Little Sun,

    I love long reviews, so it is not a problem. I think most authors would prefer long reviews.

    I have tried very hard to keep Sev and Harry in character and I think I have mostly succeeded if you can get past the fact that in canon, I am sure that Sev would NEVER accept HArry.

    The poisoned Knarl was definitely meant for HArry and you will see the consequences of that in later chapter. Nott senior is in Azkaban with Malfoy et all becuase of Harry, and so Theodore is not happy.

    You will have to wait to see any Dursleys.

    Hope to hear from you again.

Title: Chapter 7: Gryffindor vs Slytherin 19 Jan 2008 2:04 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hopefully Snape will tell Harry what he finds otherwise, knowing Harry, he will stumble across the truth somehow. Another great chapter and I must say that these constant updates make me very happy!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Alexis for another review.

    I seem to have a core group of regular reviewers which is great.

    I will have a new chapter out today, so hopefully, will hear from you again.

Title: Chapter 7: Gryffindor vs Slytherin 18 Jan 2008 6:22 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved how Severus is ruminating on fatherhood, and how to develop a bond with Harry, or if he even wants to try. (But I think he will, once he's grown a little more accustomed to the idea.)

    And it was insightful of him to realize that he made Harry walk so far as a way of taking out his own frustration and worry. Course he's been taking his feelings out on Harry for years now, and he's got to learn to relate to Harry in a healthier way.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks once again.

    Yeah, Snape is certainly a bad tempered so and so and he definitely needs to direct his ire at a new target, doesn't he.

    Yes, Sev's own childhood and his bad choices assured that he would never think of having a child. Also, the fact that the only woman he had ever loved chose another man made it certain that children were not part of his future plans.

    Best laid plans of mice and men etc...


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