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Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 27 May 2009 12:18 am
Reviewer: halfblood (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape he is such a good spy! And so awkward with comforting Harry -bless!
Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 23 Sep 2008 8:13 am
Reviewer: ak carmel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    sorry i havent reviewed every chapter but this story is just brilliant! i love the dynamic that harry and snape have going! and its so canon, i can actually see things happening the way you relay them, i mean sometimes i feel that what harry says is a bit out of character, just some phrases but other than that this story is a fav! by far!!! I hope your still writing! I would love to read anything you wrote!

    Author's Response:

    Oh well, one more review is better than none. Thank you. I would love to have an example of where you think HArry is out of character. Perhaps it is something I need to attend to, though no-one else has commented.

    I am still writing and I do have another story, but not on this site. I'm not sure it qualifies, though I am beginning to think it does. I am also not sure whether I am allowed to give you a link to the story, but if you want to e-mail me, you are welcome.

    My e-mail address is: wrappedinharry@yahoo.com.au

    Might hear from you.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 13 Feb 2008 10:36 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sooo cute!!! Thank you very, very much for the wonderful long chap!!!! I adore your way of setting Severus into action (his speaking, his way of behaving...) along with the Harry Snape interaction. ^_______^ I hope you get many more reviews because your story is worth a review!!!!! Yours truly, Melfis.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for another lovely review.

    Very glad you enjoy it as much as you obviously are.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 13 Feb 2008 8:47 am
Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just discovered this story, and love it! Your explanation of how Severus can be Harry's father is original and clever--it lets Severus in while not breaking up what Lily and James had.

    I suspected that Nott was the one that poisoned Harry, but why was Draco there? Did he help out in some way?

    Post more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Midnight Oil for your review,

     I am glad you like the way I allowed Sev to be HArry's father. I like reading Sev is HArry's father fics but the only down side of them is the fact that either lily or james are painted in a bad light. I LOVE the lily/james romance and I absolutely hate lily being a slut or cheating on james because they have a fight. I hate james being depicted as a womaniser...well you get my drift.

     Draco was at the meeting so he could be branded but also to see an example of exactly what happens when Volde is displeased. And Volde is already displeased with the Malfoys. Draco knew nothing of nott's plans to poison Harry.

     Hope you enjoy upcoming chapters.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 09 Feb 2008 6:27 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, great chapter! Please continue soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, and I will.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 09 Feb 2008 2:21 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story. I've enjoyed the slow progression that Severus and Harry have endured. The scene with both of them experiencing Voldemort's wrath was amazingly detailed and breathtaking. I really was clenching jaw imaging the mental machinations Severus was capable of to cut off pain perception while assisting Harry. The man is fearless.
    Harry's breakdown in this chapter is heartwrenching. How ironic that he thinks he would be better off dead since he is without parents when his real father stands inches away from him unable to speak truth but not longer unwilling to act for his son.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your awesome review!. It truly is humbling to know that I can write well enough to know that some people actually are clenching their jaws, or biting their nails or sitting on the edge of their seats wondering what is going to happen next.

    You have really taken the characters to heart and sharing everything they are botth going through. Thank you for that.

    And yes, I agree, it is ironic  that Hary is so very down when happiness stands before him if he but knew it. But, the path to acceptance on both sides, for Sev still hasn't totally accepted the fact of Harry being his son, is going to be rocky.

    I hope you stay with me for the journey.

    Lesley.


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