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Title: Chapter 17: The Filial Connection 27 May 2009 12:22 am
Reviewer: halfblood (Signed) [Report This]
    Only Snape could hex and threaten to curse Harry when telling him he's his dad! Somewhat lacking in subtlety and decorum methinks! Very in character though...
Title: Chapter 17: The Filial Connection 21 Feb 2008 1:24 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story! Such a differemt take. I really like Dudley - he's very lifelike, so well done. Snape's also well in character, (as is everyone really). I think the idea of the playstation was good, and its nice to see some 'fairytale' magic finally in a story (I mean the bed). Just make sure it dosn't go too mushy too fast from here on in though. I don't think it's likely too - you've held the pace fantastically!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review. I am glad you are liking the story so much.

    And don't worry, it doesn't get too mushy. I have had complaints that it has not become mushy enough. Oh, well, can't please everyone.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 17: The Filial Connection 19 Feb 2008 2:03 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited to see that you had updated, but after getting a couple of paragraphs into the chapter I realized that I had already read this chapter on another site. Darn!! The suspense is killing me.

    Part of me wants Harry just to tell Snape to go jump in a lake. I'm sure this is hard for Snape, but I'm not feeling really sympathetic towards him because he is still being so nasty towards Harry. That comment about Harry's coma being nice for him, making Harry pretty much beg to go outside, hexing him, etc., etc. I'm curious as to why Snape made the "your coma was nice for me" comment -- is it just because he's a nasty git or is he worried about Harry and just can't express it in any other way? Even so, he needs to improve fast. Harry doesn't need a father figure who is abusive, no matter if the father cares about him or not.

    I hope your muses are good to you. I need to find out what Ginny can do for Harry!

    Thanks for the story so far.

    Author's Response:

    Nice to hear from you.

    You are right. Harry certainly does not need another abusive relative. Snape's 'your coma was nice for me' comment was really his ill tempered way of letting harry know that Sev finds him incredibly annoying. And as far as the hexing in this chapter--he was feeling very hard done by because he had finally found himself in the unwanted position of having to explain a situation to Harry that he has not really come to terms with himself.

    He certainly does need to get it together though or Harry will never accept him.

    My muses are being kind to me at the moment you will be pleased to hear, so hopefully an update is definitely on the horizon. (I hope).

    Hope to hear from you again.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 17: The Filial Connection 18 Feb 2008 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Sasulia (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay Snape's told him! Wow, interesting the way Harry's reacted, and yes Ginny's coming to Privet Drive. I've always wondered what would happen if she did. I haven't really found any stories with it in, so I'm especially excited now! Excellent work, keep going, I'm sorry for not reviewing before, I will try to be better.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review and your kind words. Very glad you are enjoying ASD, and it is especially nice to hear from you.

    I am also very glad that you like Ginny because there are a lot of people out there who don't.

    Please keep reading and i hope to hear from you again.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 17: The Filial Connection 18 Feb 2008 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This chapter turned out great! Poor Harry didn't handle the news too well. Hopefully Ginny will be able to get some response out of him. Hope you'll find time to update this great story again soon! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Alexis for another lovely review.

    I am working on the next chapter diligently, except for the time when I am answering great reviews. If you take the time to write them, I think I should try to respond.

    Until next time.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 17: The Filial Connection 18 Feb 2008 2:57 pm
Reviewer: lil sun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cannot wait to hear what will happen next. Mila

    Author's Response:

    Hi Mila.

    DDid you get my e-mail?

    lesley


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