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Title: Chapter 19: Godric's Hollow 26 Aug 2009 3:35 am
Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, realised the utter insanity of my last review. Blame lack of sleep. I simply led sideways; I was cold and curled up so I could stay warmer. And when I do that I think about the story, and sometimes I fall sideways because I'm annoyed at the characters, and I think about them while I lie down. Okay, that doesn't help. Rest assured I am not actually insane. Obviously I also did not read the entire of the next chapter, but I read a little, then had to review, read a little more, reviewed a little more. Thank god for copy and paste! ANYWAY. This excellent chapter is what I was going to talk about now. Harry! Oh, god, poor Harry! The bit with the Dementors! OMG! (I would tell you about my reaction,but I'm trying to assure you I'm not insane! ;) ) I...I...Harry! God, Harry! (not helping, am I? I'll try again) The way you drag the reader in...we feel for Harry, you have such a talent, the ideas for the plot are incredible, and... and... Oh god! Nevermind, I have to read on! ;) (I'm still not insane!)
Title: Chapter 19: Godric's Hollow 27 May 2009 12:24 am
Reviewer: halfblood (Signed) [Report This]
    Why couldn't Remus produce a patronus? Was he too upset over Sirius? Still i liked the fact he was brave and still tried to sheild Harry
Title: Chapter 19: Godric's Hollow 18 Jul 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    You write a "lost" Harry very well. And all the pacing the Severus does, works well. It's not over done. There is a nice balance you have going on here. I look forward to reading more of it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again SHEla. You are doing a marathon job here.

    I take it that the anonymous reviewer for chapter 20 is you also. How come it ended up being anonymous?

    Anyway, not important. I am just thrilled that you are still enjoying it all.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 19: Godric's Hollow 18 Mar 2008 2:31 am
Reviewer: belamel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story. I just found it yesterday and spent the whole day catching up. I love your Snape, I really like how you are developing his relationship with Harry. 1 step forward, 2 steps back. But they are making those steps and you haven't kept it stagnant until "poof" they're close now. I also like how you have a bit of danger and darkness without dwelling there. This is a refreshing read. Well done!

    Author's Response:

    I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story and that you like the way I have Sev and HArry interacting.

    I couldn't write Sev unless he was his usual, snarky self. In fact, when I have to write him at least trying to be nice or concerned for HArry in any way, I can't help but feel it is all wrong. Still, the relationship has to progress.

    I hope i can continue to keep Snape in character but still have him and HArry drawing closer.

    Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 19: Godric's Hollow 16 Mar 2008 5:01 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. Liked how Dudley is becoming more mature.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your kind words.

     I always felt that Dudley had potential, despite his foul parents. It was great to see the change in canon.

    Keep reading.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 19: Godric's Hollow 16 Mar 2008 3:47 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I'm really glad that Harry got to see thier graves. At least Remus came along when he did. Harry's gonna get it now though since Severus found him!

    Author's Response:

    I can always rely on you for a review.

     Sev's response to Harry's adventure will be all important, that's for sure.

    Glad you enjoyed it.

    Lesley


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