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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
Author's Response: Thank you Kimberly. I'mappreciate the compliments. It's always lovely to hear that someone enjoys my writing, as well as the story. I do try hard. Hope to hear from you again. ~Lesley~
One question though, what hapened to Harry getting sick? before he had the mead he seemed to be coming down with an awful cold... has Severus just forgotten about it with the stress of the mead incident? Author's Response: So glad that you are enjoying the pace of the story. I have always been very aware that any change in relationship between Sev and HArry would have to be very slow, and not a smooth run forward even after they decide to give their new relationship a go. Hary is still harbouring the cold. His other symtoms have just pushed it to the background. Also, the alcohol probably did slow down the onset of a full blown cold.
Thanks for reviewing, ~Lesley~
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for your review. ~Lesley~
Stupid Harry though for getting himself drunk, but then I love a stupid Harry so of course, I loved reading it. Are we going to see more of Harry testing Sev or did he get it all out of his system...and dare I say...Sev passed this particular test. :o) I really enjoy your Albus. He's really well done. And the interaction between he and Severus is always lovely. I am also just really glad to see that Severus is working so hard on controlling his temper and it worked so well that now Harry is coming to accept him. It's really fun to watch the process. Thanks for a great chapter! :o) And I vote for Pappy! :oP Author's Response: Hi Tabitha, I'm glad ya'll voted for pappy. That's my personal favourite too. :0) Harry was definitely a very silly boy, but hey, he is a boy, he is sixteen and he is very confused. He has been through a hell of a lot, let's face it. He hasn't got a stop button either, nor even a 'look before you leap' button. He's a full steam ahead Gryffindor. And though Harry is coming to appreciate how Sev is sticking to his word and making a huge effort, hey, he even gave him a gift, he is still not going to be able to forget the last five years so easily. Certain things will rear their ugly heads on occasions. The name thing is going to be hard. I know what it's like. When I got married, I couldn't bring myself to call my in-laws 'mum and dad'. It just didn't seem right. I had a mum and dad. I never called them anything. I never called out to my mother-in-law from another room because I couldnt call out, 'Hey You'! If my mother-in-law ever noticed, she never said anything. It wasn't until my daughter started talking and christened them Maas and Paas, that I could actually address them with a title. I just adopted Erin's words. And so has the whole family since. Even my husband and his brothers. Sev will have to put Harry at his ease. I love writing Albus and Sev interactions. They play off each other so well. Albus, alway the picture of calm certainty and volatile Sev who has to always be talked around. Both fond of each other but both knowing the others faults. I have to admit, I have been a little worried about you. I tried to chat with you yesterday, (yahoo said you were on line) but you didn't respond. I was hoping you were all right. Are you? Thanks for reviewing, as usual, I appreciate your perspective. ~Lesley~
Author's Response: Thanks Phoenix1 for taking the time to come over here to review. FF was down for quite a while. I imagine I will have missed out on a few reviews because other than yourself, I doubt anyone would have made the effort to review over here. And if anyone tried to review and couldn't, chances are they won't go back to do it. Oh, well. I am very glad you enjoyed the chapter. ~Lesley~
Author's Response: Teenager...boy...these things are often not synonymous with thinking. It's not just HArry.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. ~Lesley~
So it will be interesting to see how you continue their story. Author's Response: Oh, I don't know. Sev is not going to fall in love overnight, but the fact he is beginning to worry aand care about Harry is an indication that he is starting to feel something other than hatred. I hope you stick around to see how things play out. ~Lesley~
Author's Response: Thank you very much for such an enthusiastic review anonymous. But my big question is, how in the hell did you read this so fast. I only uploaded it less than five minutes ago. I don't think even speed reading could have accomplished that! I also already have a chocolate frog rating alt=ready. That usually takes at least an hour. Mysteries, mysteries! ~Lesley~ |
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