| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 26 Aug 2009 1:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous)
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Of course their is still interest in the story! It's incredible! Only 4 people reviewed the last chapter? That's insane, I know I didn't review it, but that's only because it told me I couldn't, stupid thing! I love the way Minerva tends to Albus, hilarious. The descriptions of Severus as he brewed were excellent, I loved what Harry was thinking about how good Severus was, and how Hermione would panic if she knew how far she had to go to be as good as him, that was funny! As always your plotline is amazing, and the talent used in writing it is also amazing. I was panicking when Albus called Snape, though I guessed it was the ring, and the descriptions of his hand were... very descriptive. Very good. Did the Elder Wand stop the curse? Well, I'm going to read on to find out!
Author's Response: Hi again Vicky! Thanks for another lovely review. Yes, the interest in this story here has been waning and that is one of the reasons I do not hurry to upload new chapters. I figure if people are really keen, they would find the story over at fanfic. But I am glad you are enjoyed the chapter. I am also sure that you ahve read about the Elder wand by now. Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 27 May 2009 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: halfblood (Signed)
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I am glad DD was ok in your story (after the hand thing). I liked how you portrayed his character generally as clever, powerful, kind but not all-seeing or perfect. Some of these stories make DD seem as though he just plots and doesn't care about people at all but I think your version is good.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoy my DD. I am like you. I cannot read stories that openly bash DD. I loathe them. This is exactly how I see him. Yes, he can be manipulative, but ultimately, in canon, he did everything that he could to try to ensure that Harry defeated Voldemort and lived to tell the tale. Harry would have ended up meeting Volde in battle regardless of DD, and without his having led Harry where he did, HArry would have died. I believe that DD cared very much for Harry. it was said often enough in canon. It amazes me how people can twist things to fit there own views. Some people look up to Voldemort as a good guy and DD as the villain. amazing! Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 25 Jun 2008 7:21 am
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| Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed)
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just re-read this chapter b/c I liked it so much :) looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Now that's dedication for you. Reading it twice! Double the thanks to you, ~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 18 Jun 2008 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: mila (Anonymous)
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Oh, poor Albus. I wondered if you would use the cursed ring thing. Minerva fussing over Albus is funny to imagine. And Severus is a Potions genius. And poor Harry, his unconsciousness still not feeling safe enough to sleep uncurled. Update soon, please. Little-sun
Author's Response: Hi Mila, Was just thinking of e-mailing you because i realised that I didn't let you know that this chapter was up. But you found it all by your little ownsome! Glad you enjoyed it. I have always imagined HArry sleeping curled up in a ball. Probably protecting himself from Vernon. And Albus had better do what he is is told with Matron McGonagall on the job, that's all I can say. Hee hee. 'Talk' to you soon, ~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 17 Jun 2008 10:23 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed)
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I've just read the entire story, and I'm really enjoying it XD I really liked this chapter, especially the way you described Harry watching Severus make the potion, and the part where Albus and Severus were discussing the Elder wand.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. The response has been wonderful after I requested to know how much interest there was out there for the story. I wish I got this number of reviews every chapter here at P&S. Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. ~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 16 Jun 2008 4:11 pm
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| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Oh trust me! You still have my attention! A good chapter! It was really funny to see an event happening that also happened in the other books, yet things were going on so differently behind the scenes with Harry's presence. Good work- please keep writing! I hope to see a lot of Harry/ Severus interaction this time!
Author's Response: It is really lovely gwtting all thesereviews from hitherto unknown readers. Thak you waterleaves, it is lovely to know that you have been reading and enjoying the story. I don't really know what the problem is. I have pelnty of hits, but compared to a lot of stories out there, my reviews are practically non-existent. So I am becoming a little paranoid. But the reviews for this chapter have definitely picked up. Don't worry, Harry refuses to stay behind the scenes for vey long. He'll be back. ~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 16 Jun 2008 2:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Lovechilde (Anonymous)
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Plenty of interest! I've been awful with reviews but I'm still following nd still enjoying it very much.
Author's Response: Well thanks for letting me know that you are following the story, Lovechilde. I have had more reviews for this chapter than any other because of my comments. I would love to hear from you again, if you feel like it. Lesley.
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 16 Jun 2008 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: fluff (Signed)
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Enjoyed the chapter, it was shocking in a way but necessary. Yes love your Harry/Sev interaction but sometimes the story requires that to go on the backburner to move it on etc. But I'm looking forward to more with Harry and how their relationship will grow.
Author's Response: Thanks fluff. Am glad you appreciate that not every scene can have Harry and Sev interaction. Thanks for saying so, and the boys will be back next time. ~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man.
| 15 Jun 2008 8:35 am
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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hee! love the albus/minerva and sev/albus interaction. harry's reaction to snape's potioneering is quite interesting! great way for harry to get interested in potions... with a glimpse at what real potion-making is like. i enjoyed your last chapter very much, btw, although i did not have a chance to review it (travelling). i really like your harry-sev developing relationship and have not much to say except keep it up, i'm interested in where you are taking this!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed th chapter le skrewt, and all the interactions therein. Perhaps Harry will get interested in potions..after all, it is in his blood. I hope you enjoyed your trip, and I hope to hear from you next chapter, ~Lesley~
i like this story. good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you. Keep reading and enjoying, ~Lesley~
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