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Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 26 Sep 2008 9:43 am
Reviewer: ak carmel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    my favorite chapter so far
    i love this
    totally brilliant
    took a long way, but it was worth it to get to this point
    :)
    spectacular job.

    Ak Carmel

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Glad you have enjoyed the story so far.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 19 Jul 2008 3:59 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm loving this! I even had a "snort" moment when I read, the part about giving him the finger, and telling him where to go. That was great. For some reason my last few reviews didn't show up... so let me try again. I like how you had Minnie come back and how her relationship with Dumbledore ends up making Severus smile. Even though I don't think Severus knows that's what he's smiling about. How close to the books are going to keep this? Not that I think you're really going to answer that, but I had to try. Thanks for all of your great work on this story. See ya in about 2 weeks.
Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 17 Jul 2008 12:26 pm
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello again,
    Actually I just started reading this yesterday. I'm just starting chapter 8, but already I'm hooked. I'll try to get better about leaving reviews.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for getting back to me, SHEla. I'm glad that you found the story and that you are enjoying it.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 17 Jul 2008 7:15 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter! Hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    As sonn as possible, I promise,

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 17 Jul 2008 2:33 am
Reviewer: Andy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LOVED the dialogue in this chapter! Snape's control and Harry's natural spontaneity were well represented. And I have to say, that last scene put an enormous smile on my face. It's still there actually. Thanks!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much! I am very glad that I could make you smile.

     

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 16 Jul 2008 7:25 pm
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    I tried to contact you, but for some reason the computer I'm using wouldn't let me. Well, what I was going to say was that I noticed that on your fanfiction site, you didn't have anything by Greengecko on your favorite list. I would recommend that you try reading some of her stuff. It's great! I think you might like it, if you haven't already given it a try. Hope you enjoy.

    SHEla WOLFsbane

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the rec. I have read the first two in Greengecko's series. I preferred the first, I have to say. I kind of lost interest once HArry left Hogwarts, though it was a while ago that I read them Perhaps I should refresh my memory.

    I take it that you read ASD, though you haven't commented on it. I looked through the last few chapters reviews here and on ff.net, but didn't see your name. Nice to hear from you anyway,

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 16 Jul 2008 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice work! Please update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for letting me know you appreciate the story. I will update as soon as possible, I promise.

     

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 16 Jul 2008 5:57 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    You've done an amazing job at portraying their evolving relationship again. Every note in this hesitant duet is perfect!

    Found one possible typo though. You wrote "But Harry wasn't normal and Severus Snape had only known he was a father for five minutes, and he might think that ‘dad' was too personal." -- did you copy this from a draft of an earlier chapter? Snape's known he's a dad a lot longer than "five minutes" by now!

    Author's Response:

    Hi there, b e skrewt. Thank you for your kind words.

    And to address your question...no, I didn't copy it from another chapter. This is Harry thinking, and the 'five minutes' was just Harry exaggerating things in his won mind, but also, five munutes is about all Sev has known he is a father in the greater scheme of things.

    Hope that explanation clears it up.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 15 Jul 2008 2:29 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that chapter was brilliant, severus aNd harry finally tried to sort things out, will it last.. i have no idea, i think there will be a few more arguments but they will get through it

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reviewing kreacher. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much. And you are right...the path ahead is not going to be free of potholes.

    ~lesleY~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 15 Jul 2008 1:22 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ah, now THAT was a satisfying chapter! I'm giving you a full ten—not that I've never given you a full ten before, because I certainly have. But anyway, thought I'd mention it.

    And I should tell you—I have wholeheartedly forgiven Snape. He really got his act together. I was so relieved that he explained that he'd never meant to throw Harry out—because, whether or not he "relented" after Harry pleaded to stay, that would set a really rotten...and damaging...precedent. A very dangerous bridge to cross. But he didn't, so good.

    Sweet with Hedwig. I'm a sucker for fluff between she and Harry. So dear! Makes you want to hug both of them—if I dared to hug an owl. Might be unwise, though I suspect Hedwig at least wouldn't take my face off entirely. I'm not sure I could say the same for the average owl!

    I missed a Ginny/Harry interaction, particularly as I'm assuming at some point she'll confront him about what she heard. But I'm sure we'll get to see her soon enough. I'm also glad to be back at the Burrow—it's such a homey atmosphere.

    Yikes, I am seriously rambling. At least I've given you a long review—if not a particularly comprehensible one. That should count for something.

    Oh—I thought I'd say that Ron's comment about Harry and Ginny was a little creepy, considering she's his sister. Lol.

    Author's Response:

    I loved reading your rambling review. Thank you, and thank you for the rating. I never give a rating when I review here because I can never decide what a particular work deserves. Indecisive, that's me.

     I am glad Sev redeemed himself in your eyes. He is slowly coming around...his ice-encased heart is definitely thawing. And Hedwig...put an animal in a chapter, and you are sure to get heaps of comments about it. LOL. Glad you liked HArry and his owl. And it is lovely that you missed HArry and Ginny...I get too amny comments that knock Ginny. And as for Ron's comment...well, he is trying to make up for his earlier attitude to Harry and Ginny and probably went too far the other way. I imagine he would be a tad upset if he actually SAW Harry and Ginny so occupied. But I definitely agree with Ginny on this. What she does and who she does it with is defifitely no business of Ron's.

    Till next time, I hope,

    ~LesleY~


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