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Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 26 Aug 2009 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHHHHH! *sqeals and claps like a five year old at christmas* YAY!! SEVERUS SNAPE YOU ARE INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!! Go Severus, go Harry, go the entire world! I'm so happy!! I don't think Severus was soppy in giving Harry that, it was a perfect present...which could make it seem soppy, but hey! *squeals again* I ADORE YOU SEVERUS SNAPE!! Soooo glad he told everyone! Well, he didn't tell everyone, and I'll have to read on for that, but whatever. Brilliantly portrayed emotions, the arguement at the start between Harry and Ginny...wince. But the end!!!! YAY!!!!! I did NOT see that coming, though I'm very glad it did. Despite what Albus had said, I didn't think Severus would reveal it so soon, and in a way I guess that's an even better birthday present than Lily's book! Okay, it might not turn out like that with..peoples (read Ron's) reactions, but I'm going to read on right now to find out.

    Author's Response:

    Hey Vicky! Still enthusiastic, I see. LOL Glad you enjoyed it so much. I agree with you...Harry would have been thrilled just with the revelation, but the gift also means so much to him. Something that his mother owned and touched and wrote in.

     

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 10 Nov 2008 7:57 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful *shocking* end to the chapter!
Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 05 Nov 2008 5:25 pm
Reviewer: mwc (Signed) [Report This]
    have to say, i didn't think that severus was *that* out of character. i thought it was the sort of thing he would do if allowed this kind of interaction in his life. love your portrayal of young love in the beginning of the chapter and really loved the ending. i always look forward to another chapter of this fic. keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 22 Oct 2008 12:29 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT chapter. Harry did the right thing...I know Ginny's upset, but she's lucky to have a guy that respects her that much! (Of course, Harry is also lucky to have Ginny, but that's beside the point...

    Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Glad you liked their interaction. And I agree that they are lucky to have each other.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 21 Oct 2008 11:06 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    The story is turning into red library! *grumbles*
    I wonder why Severus revealed there was a relationship between them *curious*
    I hope your inspiration is back and that you will update soon.
    Mila

    Author's Response:

    Hi Mila. How are things?

    Not sure what you mean by the story turning into red library means, but as you're grumbling, I don't suppose it can be good. Not a fan of OOC Sev?

    Sev thought long and hard about Harry's dilemma, what with school coming up and them being in close-ish proximity to each other and how hard it would be for Harry to try to continue with the negative emotions in front of his friends. When the explanations come, he and DD will have to emphasise how important it is for it all to remain a secret. The Weasley's won't give them away.

    Of course, they are going to have to keep up the pretense around the Slytherins and the rest of the school, but Harry will not care about that because his best friends know and he doesn't have to try and hide his emotions from them when they are together.

    Inspiration comes and goes, but I am trying to keep the ball rolling.

    ~Lesley~

Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 21 Oct 2008 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter, I like the idea of the so near yet so far scene with Ginny, it's a point in a relationship that is too often skipped. The hug at the end is soppy Snape at it's best, Well Done. Post soon

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it

     

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 21 Oct 2008 6:22 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and i think harry and ginny will work out there problem with abit of time, severus was a surprise, as i didn't think he would openly hug harry in front of everyone, the younger weasleys will be spitting blood

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review. And yes, HArry and Ginny will be OK.

    Sev had to come to a decision about letting the Weasleys in on his and Harry's relaionship, and Harry's pleading and DD's urging finally pushed him to this.

    Ron will of course overreact but hopefully he will eventually settle. Ginny already knows there was something going on because of the argument she heard between Harry and DD after the Godric's Hollow incident.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 21 Oct 2008 5:24 pm
Reviewer: Natalie- (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nicely done :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 21 Oct 2008 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Brittany (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG - brilliant chapter ending! The balance between your Snape and the real Snape was obvious, and while yours was OOC it wasn't overdone. Well done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your enthusiastic review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thought Sev wasn't too OOC.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever 21 Oct 2008 11:23 am
Reviewer: fluff (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww the ending was lumpy in the throaty, lovely. Oh to be a fly on the wall of that room when that happened!
    Nice chapter, poor Harry trying to do the right thing and getting into more trouble for it.

    Author's Response:

    Hi Mila. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yep, it certainly would have been interesting being there for that revelation. You will see more next chappie.

    Harry and Ginny will settle things between them...as far as they can when rampant hormones keep on rearing their persistent heads.

    How are theings with you?

    ~LesleY~


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