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Title: Chapter 35: A laying Down of Arms. 25 Nov 2008 2:27 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    i for one love reading this story and i am sorry that i havent reviewed...my internet doesnt work well where i am so i normally go somewhere else and copy and paste the chapter into word so i can read it at home. today i happen to be at my cousins house who has great internet so i can finally review!! my review is that i love your writing and i love how harry has his insecurities about his relationship with sev. well done! cant wait for the next installment

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much for going to all the trouble that you do to read my story. And thank you for the review. It warms my heart to know that ASD is so inspiring that someone goes to the lenghts you do to read it.

    It is lovely to hear from you and at least, if I don't hear from you again, I will know that you are reading. That is the important thing.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 35: A laying Down of Arms. 25 Nov 2008 1:25 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry and Snape seem to be doomed to misread each other intentions. You did a great job describing their relationship, the ups and downs, how others interact with them etc.. Looking forward to more of the story

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Good to hear from you again.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 35: A laying Down of Arms. 25 Nov 2008 11:26 am
Reviewer: Grest (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The story is great and becomes only better, though it seems impossible to this point allready. Please, don't drop ASD and carry on the tradition to surprise us with every new chapter ;-) Though every fairy tale has it's 36-th chapter, but I would like ASD to go on forever! Ashaimed to admit - I was extremely grateful but lasy admirer. *Flushes fiercely* Thank you for this little treasure and please, please, please, update soon!

    Author's Response:

    What a lovely review, thank you so much. Thank you for letting me know that you are reading and enjoying ASD so much. I have no plans to abandon the story, nor, at this stage to finish it.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 35: A laying Down of Arms. 25 Nov 2008 10:09 am
Reviewer: Belelaith (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like your story. The characters are believable and have enough emotional depth to be engaging.
    I would like to state my opinion that I enjoy long stories and long chapters as I feel that the character and plot developments most often are more thought through and therefore more cohesive.
    ASD is a wonderful story with lots of little details which make the story entertaining and thought provoking.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for the lovely review. Another vote for long chapters. Yay. I am very glad that you are enjoying ASD so much.

    Hope to hear from you again.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 35: A laying Down of Arms. 25 Nov 2008 9:09 am
Reviewer: Aleu-n-Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I know what you mean about wanting more when reading a story you like. It's one thing when you get a nice long chapter like this one that ends in a semi-cliffy ending and another when you get about eight paragraphs and a huge cliffy. It annoys me so much.

    I'm really enjoying the story so far ^^

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. First reviewer for this chapter. I seem to be incapable of writing short chapters. This chapter is shorter than my usual, and I have decided to try and cut them down to between five and six thousand words, instead of eight to ten, and occasionally twelve. But I am glad you prefer a decent length chapter. And I am glad that you are enjoying the story.

    Lesley

     


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