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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
Author's Response: Sorry for the delayed reply. I was not getting alerts about reviews over here at P&S. The problem has been rectified. Glad you liked this chapter(s). Thank you for taking the time to get back to me.
Lesley~
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. I enjoyed writing Sev and Pig. Lesley
Glad you fixed Harry and Ron quickly, while Harry and Snape are great, both really needing their relationship, but both too alike and too inexperienced in normal family interactions to have a clue where boundaries lie. And who would have thought Snape would take to Pig like that! Looking forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: I didn't want Ron and Harry to be on the outer for too long. I love Ron and I think that Ron would be loathe to allow any disagreements to fester. He is very volatile, true, but he needs Harry as much as Harry needs him. I feel that Ron is closer to Harry, or perhaps just as close, as he is with his brothers. Sev and Harry are advancing faster now and the setbacks are able to be dealt with. Both of their emotions are fully caught up in the other now, and neither is fighting the connection. I think Sev would be an animal lover and this is the indication that he is a redeemable character; he is capable of kindness and caring, and that is beginning to overflow into his dealings with other wizards, particularly Harry. Of course he has to keep this side of himself secret, except in front of the select few. But of course, snark and nastiness are still there...he has not turned into an angel, just a more tolerable human. The only one who knew this before was Albus. Thanks for reading Lesley
My favorite line was by Harry: "Sorry about Pig...I know he will annoy the crap out of you." Harry does know his father to a certain degree, after all. Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it. And yes, Harry is very quickly getting to know Sev..a combination of his previous dealings with the man, combined with the reluctant caring that Sev showed while Harry was sick and the glimpses of worry (that more often than not express themselves as anger) that he sees Severus displaying. Of course, he wants to get to know his father..he craves this relationship. And Sev is beginning to realise that here is something being handed to him that he didn't even realise he wanted.
LesleY
I can not wait till you update this again! Please don't wait too long i had completely forgotten what happened in the last chpter :{ anyways please update this again and the Muggle!! that would be an early x-mass for me!! :D Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding to this. I did not realise that I had missed repsonding to so many reviews. Mia Culpa! You have probably given up on me as my next update for ASD was quite a while in coming. Have you seen it yet. Anyway, glad you enjoyed this. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you for this review Lunaz. Glad you're enjoying the story so far and looking forward to more. Lesley
I love how you are handling the characters and the plotline. It's flowing nicely and you have let us into the characters heads just enough whist filling in the other iinformation we need ot know with your excellent dialog. Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Hi there! Glad you liked the Pig scene. I really enjoyed writing that. I do think that Minerva's ponderings are spot on. AWho would have thought? But I think Sev would be an animal lover. He would find it easier to get on with them than with people. It's gratifying to know that you enjoy the dialogue. I try very hard to make it as natural as possible. Nice to know I have succeeded. Thanks so much for your review. Lesley
Author's Response: Sorry about the format. Don't know what happened there. When I checked the format after I had uploded it, it looked perfectly normal and I went to bed as soon as I put it up. I didn't fix it...I was asleep. One of the administrators (a friend) did it for me, so thanks to Tabitha. Glad you enjoyed the characters..I try really hard to keep them as much in character as the story will allow. And I have always thought that Sev would be an animal lover and that animals would like him. But saying that, I think that Pig is anyone's fan. There's a ways to go yet before the story is finished, so you don't have to worry that it will be done too soon. Lesley.
Thanks for the update! As usual, another great chapter. I thought Ron's reactions were natural and totally in character. I would have loved it if Flitwick and Poppy had heard Minerva's comment about Sev being an old softy! Donna Author's Response: Thanks Donna. Glad you enjoyed it and glad that you were happy with Ron. I think Flitwick and Poppy both might have their suspicions that Sev isn't totally the acerbic character he usually comes across as. They have known him for a long time, after all. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It's inevitable that the kids grow up and mature in their attitudes. And Sev is also doing a bit of growing up in the eomtions department. Lesley |
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