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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
The chapter was very good, as always. Author's Response: Thank you for your condolences. I was surprised that this review was for chapter 37 when the alert was for 38. Are you words about the chapter for 37 or 38. Whichever it is...thank you. Lesley~
Author's Response: I am sorry I did not reply to this review. I only just found it and several others from around this time. I don't think my head was on straight. Thank you for your review and your condolences. Lesley~
I am sorry to hear about the loss of your sister. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. Thank you for taking the time to write your story. I enjoy reading it very much. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words, and your parayers. And you are very welcome. I love writing the story and sharing it with all of the people who wish to read it. Lesley
Remarkable chapter (more so considering your grief). I find the interaction between the various characters is like a dance....to and fro....give and take....wonderful seeing how the various realationships are evolving. I look forward to reading more. Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. They are much appreciated. Also your thoughts on the chapter. So glad you are enjoying all the characters. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Lesley
Author's Response: Thanks Tab. Glad you enjoyed it. Did you find many mistakes? LOL. I'm hoping to be able to bring Remus into the story a bit more now. I love Gift so much partly because of Remus' presence amongst the main players. His relationship with Sev and HArry. I am working towards a lessening of Sev's hostility towards the lovely werewolf. Sev is finally finding out that Harry has definitely gotten undder his skin big time. And he is not as averse to it as he envisioned himself being. Apparently finding out you are a father to a teenager can be just as addictive as finding out you are a father or going to be a father to a newborn. It is a newborn relationship after all. Kreacher definitely had to come into it as I am sticking to canon as much as possible. Thanks for the review Tab. Les~
I am so sorry to hear about your sister. My condolences. How you managed to write such a great chapter, is beyond me, but I guess it is a sort of soothing process to write, although it doesn't take away the grief completely. Author's Response: Hey Dawn. I have been going through my reviews and found several not answered from around the time my sister died. I think I was way out there and let things slide. Thanks for your condolences, but I probably 'spoke' to you somewhere else to thank you. Lesley~
One thing I have really enjoyed about this story is how you have kept Snape in character, while allowing his feelings towards Harry to grow. You've made the transition very realistic, and I especially enjoyed this chapter because although Sev really struggles with showing his feelings, and Harry struggles with accepting Severus' change of heart, they are finally on the road to understanding one another. Ooh, Kreacher is creepy isn't he. Poor Harry, having to be his master. I love how Sev is such a good support for Harry in this. I also enjoyed the little argument between Hermione and Ron. Too funny! Ron really is clueless, isn't he! I simply can't wait for the next chapter. MY heart can't take it! :0 Author's Response: Thank you for the review, also. Lesley~
Please accept my heartfelt condolences on the loss of your sister. I lost a sibling last year as well and, although I'm sure the circumstances are different,I understand the pain of it. That said, thanks for another wonderful chapter. It amazes me how you show Severus warming towards Harry while still keeping him in his usual snarky character. I am also enjoying your characterization of the ever clueless Ron. Thanks Again, Donna Author's Response: I was going through my reviews Donna and found I had not responded to this one. Thank you for your condolences. I do not think I was functioning very well and so missed several reviews. I know it was a while ago, but I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. Lesley~
Author's Response: A belated thank you for this review and your condolences. Didn't realise I had unresponded to reviews. Lesley~ |
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