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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
The other bit i wanted to review but couldn't find as I was scanning through quickly was when Harry has a go at Snape for brewing a poison. I thought the way you wrote that bit was very skillful. It made me feel it from both sides... for Harry having to come to terms with the fact that Snape spying role entails some horrible actions. As for Snape -well what Harry said was horrible so I could see why he was furious... Oh and I really liked the bit when DD told Snape Harry had inherited his temper lol Anyway enough wittering from me. Please update again soon :) Author's Response: I know you wrote this review a while back. somehow I have lost track of my reviews from P&S. I have not been getting alerts that I have reviews from over here. So, I apologise for not answering. I do thank you for your review and your compliments. I have not been idle with my writing BTW. I have updated two chapters from other stories, but you will be pleased to hear that I have nearly finished the next chapter of ASD.
Lesley~
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad that I could please. Lesley~
Author's Response: Two in one. Lots of reading. Glad you liked them both. Lesley~
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know how much you are enjoying the story. Lesley~
Author's Response: Thanks! Lesley~
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Lesley~
I like your story but do you know it can only be read by chapters it does not allow you to read the whole story Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for your review. I am not entirely sure what you mean by 'it can only be read in chapters'. You can only read one chapter at a time, then you should be able to click onto the next chapter. All the stories on P&S are the same if they are multi-chaptered. I wi;; go into the story and see if I can see what you are talking about. No one else has ever complained about a glitch with the story formatting. Lesley~
-P.G. Author's Response: Thanks PG. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Sev is experiencing all the angst that goes with the territory of being a parent. Not sure he likes it all that much. LOL. Harry's just going through a particularly rough time because Sirius' death has bee brought to the fore again. He has never had time to grieve. Sev, with Remus' help will slowly bring him back to his previously happy state. And to say that Harry has been truly happy with anything but his friendship with Ron and Hermione, no matter for how short a time, is a great thing. Lesley~
I think the reason I love this chapter so much is that Severus was so vulnerable while still maintaining his aura of strong. His feelings for Harry really came shining through . Author's Response: Thanks DAwn. You are a true fan! sEVERUS' EMOTIONS ARE DEFIMITE;LY CAUGHT UP IN haRRY NOW, MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE IN HIS LIFE AND HE IS NOT SURE HOW TO ENTIRELY live with that. He's not entirely sure how he likes being so vulnerable. (Sorry about the caps. I have to look at the keyboard while I type...not being a typist, and I hit caps lock without realising and couldn't be bothered rewriting.) But love for the boy he previously despised is overtaking him faster than he was prepared for. Thanks for both your reviews (the first of which I haven't responded to yet). Lesley~ |
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