| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 09 Jul 2020 9:09 am
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| Reviewer: fioghra (Signed)
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Thank you so much for this story! I got too engrossed in it that I sat down and just read all 43 chapters at one go without noticing. I loved everything about it (though poor Harry, he just can't get a break can he) and your depiction of the growing relationship between Severus and Harry. I cannot wait to read more! (:
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 19 Feb 2020 10:09 am
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| Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed)
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pleasee update,tu historia merece un final! es muy buena!!
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 15 Jan 2012 6:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wow! Like your other story that is posted here on P&S, I literally couldn't stop reading from beginning to end. I actually almost dropped my laptop after dozing off after staying up far too late, and immediately picked up to read the last three posted chapters as soon as I woke up this morning.
I think I like this story even better than your other one, particularly the realistic way you are handling Harry and Severus' relationship with each other. The one-step-forward-two-steps-back pace of their beginning to trust each other, and admitting that they really had come to love one another in a father-son way was incredibly well-written. Too many fics rush that final acceptance of each other, and those stories leave me unsatisfied. Even though this one is not finished, I feel as if I've just eaten a delicious meal which will sustain me as I wait for the next course.
I am intrigued by Harry's wild magic. Too bad he doesn't remember doing it. The knowledge of the power of it might actually increase his confidence that he is strong enough to stand up against Voldemort and survive. But his amnesia makes for great emotional and angsty suspense, so I'm glad you're working it this way.
Thanks, also, for how you are handling Harry and Ginny's emergent romantic relationship. I think it's the best I've seen published so far.
I do hope that you will come back to both of these stories and finish telling the tales. They're going on my favorites list, and I'm going to be recommending them to my friends.
Well done!
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 12 Mar 2011 10:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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I have really been enjoying your lovely story! I hope you will update again!
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 17 Feb 2011 5:30 am
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| Reviewer: Crystal (Anonymous)
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Wow, i love this story. It so well written and easy to read. It keeps me captivated and on my toes. I appreciate all the time and dedication you must have put into this. I am truly looking forward to more.
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 14 Jan 2011 3:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Marilyn Coerra (Anonymous)
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Yes, certainly....I don't doubt your vocabulary. It's just that when I see the stories I particularly like, I feel like making them perfect to the fingertips so I can them to show my friends. Well, I hope I haven't inadvertently hurt your pride, because I certainly didn't mean to...in fact, I am waiting for an update with bated breath!
Author's Response: No, you did not hurt my pride. I am glad you are enjoying the story. I know it has been a long time since I last updated, but I am working on a new chapter. It is very slow going though I am afraid. Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 13 Jan 2011 12:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Allysa (Anonymous)
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Yeah, of course it's great....sometimes I feel like throttling all these adults around Harry..Merlin, they're all mother hens! If I were Harry, I'm not sure I would have been too happy myself....
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Yes, poor Harry's life is one trial after another, isn't it. Although finding a father in there must count as good, I hope. LOL Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 10 Aug 2010 4:59 pm
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| Reviewer: mimiheart (Anonymous)
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I'm glad you're updating again. I like this story.
| Title: Chapter 43: Wild Magic in the Air
| 07 Aug 2010 12:53 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating and not letting this story go. You are still writing to the same high standard and I love the scenes with Tonks on the train!
This was a wonderful chapter, scary, exciting and funny by turns. I really like how you depict the characters' emotional state, especially Severus and Harry as they try to build their relationship without letting out the secret. I do hope you continue posting here as I look forward to each chapter very much. Bravo on sorting out the computer issues. They can be more frustrating than teaching Neville Longbottom to make a shrinking solution.
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